Comments by All Members

"Lovely, lilting and softly compelling."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Our Skin It Sighs" by Strataic

"I too sleep while watching my eyesight fade. I however could never put it into words until I read this. The feeling of waking up when I wasn’t even aware I was sleeping is all too painful. The staircase of life is a very long one, and I often feel numb just trying to reach the bottom. Very nicely written."
Posted by LateNightThoughts on "Still Here, I Suppose" by Strataic

"So evocative and painfully familiar in feeling... except for bathrooms , they never appreciate any sacrifices and make for a crappy witness... keep existing , maybe for all of us on the edge..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Still Here, I Suppose" by Strataic

"The line “I’m thirsty as my need to be here, is dry” is incredibly well crafted. Great write."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "Incompetent at Life" by Strataic

"very dark I enjoyed it, : ) : ("
Posted by happilydepressed on "Incompetent at Life" by Strataic

"This was an interesting concept. Thank you for sharing."
Posted by Shaded_Iris on "My Colourless Book" by Strataic

"Flowing as one voice, you guys nailed it! Really well done!"
Posted by natalie on "Incidental (Feat. Symbol)" by Strataic

"Almost sounds like unrequited love...but maybe it's love that is accepted but not believed that it is worthy of being so? A beautiful write that warms the heart whilst pulling at its strings gently. Thanks for sharing."
Posted by natalie on "The Unreadable Poem" by Strataic

"So beautifully pieced together! A truly breath taking view of love."
Posted by natalie on "Our Skin It Sighs" by Strataic

"Oh wow! The heaviness of this is palpable and can be taken in so many ways..thanks for lifting the veil."
Posted by natalie on "Anatomically Blind" by Strataic

"Sounds like a bit of writer's block... Don't try to hardNot a killer by nature.. I am a killer of things I don't fully understandingly! This statement comes with the burden of shame and apology that may seem unnecessary... You're gone..and I'm to blame! You stole into my space And could not be embraced... I feared your intent! Breeding kin That made my skin Crawl with repulsion... And I begged you to leave But you are feral..had to stand brave And though many fractions less than my own... You are known To bite when you're feeling a threat So you'll stand your ground.. To your death. Some of you sting with poisonous intent Downing opponents that to you are giant Making us fear you just by sight or sound By any means; we don't want you around! I did not mean to end your life Just tried coaxing you to live it out in the wild.. But you resisted all my attempts at guiding you back out where you belonged And made your presence known throughout my home... That Nazi death spray was only meant to make you flee To the outside world and to safety.. But stubborn you stood and made a lunge So that plume of spray cut short your plunge. Please forgive the human side of me For unwittingly ending what was not mine to end...you were just a baby..but we were not, could not ever be friends. .I have found that it will come with less effort."
Posted by natalie on "My Colourless Book" by Strataic

"DARKNESS AND LIGHT BOTH FALL ON ALL STILL IN THE MIND, WE FEEL ITS PRESENCE THOUGH UNSEEN , FOR LIGHT AND DARKNESS ARE ALSO BLIND....WELL DONE HERE BROTHER, WELL DONE....13......"
Posted by 13sonsofgod on "Anatomically Blind" by Strataic

"talc and soft dust -bunnies and an oh so quiet , intense stasis ... dark meditations,,,"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Anatomically Blind" by Strataic

"uniquely interesting ! I sometimes feel that darkness you describe. Stay safe!"
Posted by natalie on "Song of Sadness" by Strataic

"We are the darkness you carry...enjoyed your ink....13......"
Posted by 13sonsofgod on "Song of Sadness" by Strataic

"I revel in this , what more can I say ?"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Mon Coeur" by Strataic

"Nice word flow. I enjoyed this because of the haunting taste of the rhythm and meter. :)"
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "Mon Coeur" by Strataic

"I actually felt that the hyphens didn't work for me. I found myself over enunciating... like "hal-eff", reading it as two separate words. I feel that there's too many hyphenations. I think the line breaks would be sufficient, sans hyphens. "
Posted by Cassette on "Maggot-Go-Round." by Strataic

"Im still around if you look in the right places :) "
Posted by Strataic on "Our Skin It Sighs" by Strataic

"I don't know what it means , I don't know what it means ... fingernails , coffin nails ... witchy poisonous antidote trails ... visions varnished , bandaged braille ... living in the past , standing stale ... I'm taking it as a call to move forwards , onwards and upwards ... congratulations :)"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Coating Backwards" by Strataic

"Congratulations on getting Poem Of The Day! Reb:). "
Posted by Unknown on "Coating Backwards" by Strataic

"This really is a stunner , if you happen to drop by again , well done :)"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Too Few Words" by Strataic

"Yes the last lines are the loveliest."
Posted by Unknown on "Too Few Words" by Strataic

"Congratulations on getting Poem Of The Day! This is very well deserved. Reb:)."
Posted by Unknown on "Too Few Words" by Strataic

"If I could place the face of shock disgust and mortification right here that would be my comment. Plus well done. "
Posted by sIo on "Tree Of Corpse's" by Strataic

"Um... fell in love with this piece*"
Posted by soul_versing on "Slumber" by Strataic

"Your poems are very extraordinary and mystic, also creative and perfectly composed."
Posted by Unknown on "Slumber" by Strataic

"Excellent write, very creative and wise."
Posted by Unknown on "Mon Coeur" by Strataic

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