Comments by tmanzano
- "Pretend? No, this is more real than most things I have know in my life, if not the most. A surreal read. Your lines are thick with virtue and destiny. The speed and breaks, almost like breathing in syncopation with an outer wonder fantasy. Love... "
Posted by tmanzano on "Swaying Silent" by Maladroit
- "I wrote this somewhat drunk.... and remembering reading you late Like nights like these. Pordone the misspelled words and fat finger typing from my cell phone. Ha!! As if you were reading this right now. Fuckin whore... Come back here and write something for me!!!! "
Posted by tmanzano on "Ensorcelling " by Maladroit
- "I miss you very much B.... I miss your intellegence. Your weaving wayward words that lead me into visceral visions. I so wish you would write here again. Thus is my most cherished read from anyone. It's is flooring. Please come back some day. "
Posted by tmanzano on "Ensorcelling " by Maladroit
- "You twisted twig. Your ability to manipulate me is remarkable. Much as the evolved must, and pillow talk suffers in comparison to this piece, I too would fancy a spell in your couch world and a mouth full of feathers. Wonderful."
Posted by tmanzano on "Mouthful of Feathers" by Maladroit
- "I remember once when I looked at the end of the hall. My mom placed a full length mirror there. The mirror did not last. "
Posted by tmanzano on "Eye Eater" by Maladroit
- "Coddling a divergent child can have its... Pitfalls, one that your mother seemed to have navigated gracefully. This is a masterful write. One the echoes and reverberates the soul of both the mother and the child. I for one, have not had the privilege to be embraced by its doctrine.
Gaslighting... How very apropos. I mean to backhand you in that champagne bathtub. Jealousy has no bounds of beseech. Your mother was as wise as one that can be called just that...and for this, and the read, I am renewed as one of divergence."
Posted by tmanzano on "Gaslighting Baby" by Maladroit
- "Oh sweetie, it is so much more. The brilliant you could change the world. The ugly knew it and got jealous... And girlfriend, I'm not talking surface. So much more. Wonderful write. "
Posted by tmanzano on "Reservation of Violence, Tapped" by Maladroit
- "Isn't it that way with most of us who tip toe in the night... We share only pieces of our selves. The sides we want them to see. because "If they had all of me they would not deisire me anymore". Sometimes I wish the "evidence" was even noticed. Fantastic write. Identified. The quiet guilt was defining.
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Posted by tmanzano on "Ensorcelling " by Maladroit
- "I thirsted for each new line in each stanza... So bittersweet, so red velvet, so brightly dark. So, poetic. Very turned on by this... Enjoyed this read. Makes me think I married wrong."
Posted by tmanzano on "Sex with a Box" by Maladroit
