Comments by tmanzano

  • "I'm not sure I'd mind if you hollowed me out and built a house. Best line I have read in quite some time. It lifted off the page for me, stayed a while and will stay around for the weekend. I love that I will ruminate on it... Nice write."
    Posted by tmanzano on "I hope you like sugar" by Phalanx
  • ""Revolving so tight in formation, we go nuclear." "This kind of love is how stars are born." ... Yes, this worked well for me. To end this way was a nice contrast against your designer rub. Enjoyed the read!!"
    Posted by tmanzano on "Uneducated Guess" by Phalanx
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