Comments by NarcissusNarcosis
- "Your structuring style lends well to this piece. The hyphenations help accentuate certain parts, 'Hal-f- Torn'...I like it, your writing is interesting and original. Poetic work here, cool post
-NN"
Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on "Maggot-Go-Round." by Strataic
- "Very neat, well-written... "..caressed magic from Moon-vivid illusions; and As whispers wrangled senses, We found the ground-This wraith became me..." I like it. No offense, but I appreciate when someone points a typo out to me; 'one leg to many' supposed to be 'too', or did I misread? If so, my mistake; either way, awesome post!
-NN"
Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on "A Poets Electrified Paper" by Strataic
