Comments by NarcissusNarcosis
- "Very awesome..I like the way you structured this; this style, where each stanza can stand alone, but also goes together with the others as a whole-you pulled it off nicely. Haven't seen this type of poem in awhile...those last words, "retrieving meaning for the grieving", have an awesome rhyme...interesting and deep, to be so short; great post!
-NN"
Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on "exhale" by Nehema
- "Karen, you nailed it... and you inspired this with such a beautiful and tragic post, as you inspire so many other poets... you are an inspiration to us all...great post"
Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on "Good Girl" by Nehema
- ""Did it make you feel?
Anger? or Pain? or Pleasure?
Intellect killing retrospect
Emotions are the buried treasure"....
WOW... this is...brilliance...this is a writing that I consider of utmost importance...I have no words good enough to compliment this...just....I LOVE THIS... "
Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on "Unambiguous" by Nehema
