Comments by Lynaes

  • " so precise is this feeling, but also so intangable.. but you've managed to put it into graceful words. I respect that a lot. "
    Posted by Lynaes on "ohgod" by doll on the rag
  • "Good god, how I felt this.. so raw and severe.. "someone's been crawling up my insides again and i woke up with this dirt lining my mouth".. "
    Posted by Lynaes on "ohgod" by doll on the rag
  • "I agree with paperflowers.. "chilling" and "haunting" are two perfect descriptions for this piece.. so are "masterful" and "artistic" You write so close to the bone, and I love it. "
    Posted by Lynaes on "anything you can do," by doll on the rag
  • "Sometimes you read a piece of literature, and you just know it's a huge achievement created by someone greatly talented.. this is one them. I commend you for the vividness, for the realism, the uncensored raw emotion.. This is truly brilliant. Perfection."
    Posted by Lynaes on "abortion 101" by doll on the rag
  • "This.. is awesome. I thought the line "i'll give you a bloody lip if you promise to kiss me with it later and not flinch" was incredible enough, but the very last one gave it that almighty punch. Wonderfully unique. "
    Posted by Lynaes on "street fighter" by doll on the rag
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