Comments by Lynaes
- "Say goodnight, and good morning to a new day. There is always tomorrow. I know this hurts, and I wish it didn't. Because that I wouldn't feel so guilty appreciating such amazing work. "
Posted by Lynaes on "key.note speakers [on mute]" by Six-Out
- ""so write me letters on your tattered dreams." thank you for deciding to post this. If you get to close to something so amazing, it's bound to have some affect.. brilliant."
Posted by Lynaes on "drops." by Six-Out
- ""We scream like gods in the sea." What I like about this is that is has power behind it, in so few words. Nice work. "
Posted by Lynaes on "city.park [at sundown]" by Six-Out
- ""shoving a page into my chest. the ink eats me".. wow. Talk about digging into a person's core. This is amazing, Jon."
Posted by Lynaes on "she spoke obsidian" by Six-Out
- "My god, so enchanting and beautiful.. reading this made me feel wistful and beautiful. Thank you. I love when two amazing poets merge together."
Posted by Lynaes on "railroads and coastlines" by Six-Out
- ""I'd exhale. but my breath has left me." I'm not even sure what to say Jon.. Just think about what I've always said about your writing, because I feel exactly the same. You amaze me in so many ways. "
Posted by Lynaes on "real men admit to their tears." by Six-Out
- "...all I can muster is an echo of sin and Dave's comments.. I'm speechless. and even if I wasn't, my words wouldn't do this an iota of justice. damn, Jon.."
Posted by Lynaes on "[starlight.sonnet]" by Six-Out
- "Yeah, what The Timness said.. Please don't kill it. "for the hopeless- that are never willing to die. and the broken that will never stop pulling the pieces together" ..how can words be so accurate? This is perfect Jon. damn"
Posted by Lynaes on "-sympathetic" by Six-Out
- "You're a pro at making something so heartbreaking completely artful.. You know I think this is heart breaking, it cuts deep.. but seriously, I'm amazed."
Posted by Lynaes on ".silk.bullets. [rip me gently]" by Six-Out
- "Damn.. There's far too many lines I could quote. The emotion in this was just, painful to read.. But in response to the last few lines, some things do matter. you matter to your friends for example. Seriously awesome work Jon."
Posted by Lynaes on "matchstick muse... [one thousand pieces]" by Six-Out
- "I do love this rant, I agree with everything you say. you speak with truth and a strong fluent passion. Qualities that are crystal clear in you. "
Posted by Lynaes on "My Suicide Rant (revised)" by Six-Out
- "and didn't want to go through the suffering, didn't want their family to see it. If it's agreed with the family, then I think it's a reason."
Posted by Lynaes on "My Suicide Rant (revised)" by Six-Out
- "Incredible.. it's like diving into a profound memory and coming back up to the surface into cold reality. The message is so heart wrenching, so raw and true. This is amazing, fantastic work Six. "
Posted by Lynaes on "Aspyxiation (battle for the truth)" by Six-Out
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