Comments by Lynaes
- "I hate people like that, and have unfortunately come across a lot of them.. it's sad really. and indeed, what has happened to you get what you give? Awesome work morb it's good to see you post again.
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Posted by Lynaes on "Lost in a world of sociables" by Mistress Morbid
- "Absolutely breath taking imagery.. so entracing and magnificent, I imagined this as a painting, spreading stains of purples, blues and pinks across the scene.. absolutely magical you guys, a wonderful collab. "
Posted by Lynaes on "Moonlit Torrent (Feat. Twilight)" by Mistress Morbid
- "Ooh wow.. Such a haunting and chilling image, like a flash of destruction set into the mind.. this was haunting, yet beautifully expressed. Amazing work Morb. this is like a punch in the stomach, but you enjoy it. ~L"
Posted by Lynaes on "Endeavor (A wish)" by Mistress Morbid
- "The last two lines were gutting and devastating, so sad.. I loved the second stanza, gorgeous imagery. Eloquent work Morb. ~L "
Posted by Lynaes on "Deep Six Elated" by Mistress Morbid
- "Oh my, this was so dark and sinister.. I could see it all, so scary! I loved the colours, it really added to this tension.. Amazing work morb! :D ~L"
Posted by Lynaes on "Blue Eyed Porcelain" by Mistress Morbid
- "Wow, this was so, so vivid. I could
the whole thing in my mind's eye. The constant cycle of confusion, feeling lost and facing your fears only to delve back into the trap again. stunning and emotive, Morb, I love it. -L "
Posted by Lynaes on "Cornfield Effect" by Mistress Morbid
- "Wow, very disturbing and so thick with imagery. And so true, the world is destroying it's self with growing violence, and all for nothing. Amazing write Morb, really amazing. ~L"
Posted by Lynaes on "Alas" by Mistress Morbid
- "Wow, very disturbing, and also a beautiful expression of what can go on underneath a person's visage, stunning imagery, I loved this. ~L"
Posted by Lynaes on "Ounce Of Pain" by Mistress Morbid
- "Oh wow, this was very trippy, I enjoyed the way you've portrayed this.. The image I get from this is sad until "But My !.inner beauty.! Will always *Shine* so bright" gave it an uplifting twist of hope. Amazing work Morb. ~L
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Posted by Lynaes on "Body Rot" by Mistress Morbid
- "Awww Morbid this is so perfect! *hugs* Seriously it's absolutely gorgeous. Thank you. :) Now I'm day dreaming of us three in this poem, being pirates hehe.. Perfection, pure perfection. :) ~L "
Posted by Lynaes on "Let the Journey Begin" by Mistress Morbid
- "such gorgeous imagery! this was very dreamy and lush with a fantasy-like quality. "Sometimes we like to play In the puddles it leaves behind *Have a good time*", so much depth and meaning, not letting the bad times go. Amazing, Morb, I'm stunned. :) -L "
Posted by Lynaes on "Today Is The Day" by Mistress Morbid
- "Beautifully conveyed.. The way thoughts of our insecurities fade in and out of focus in our minds, and we create a picture of what we want but it remains forever untouchable. Stunning work.. And you ARE a beautiful girly. :) ~L"
Posted by Lynaes on "The reflection in the water" by Mistress Morbid
- "Wow, the first stanza hit me hard. I know that feeling all too well. *hugs* A sad, beautiful write.. Just wanted to let I'm here for you. :) ~L"
Posted by Lynaes on "Nothing" by Mistress Morbid
- "Wow, that was a hard blow.. The wording and structure of this was so casual, but so shocking when you read the last lines. Fantastic work! ~L "
Posted by Lynaes on "Blinded" by Mistress Morbid
- "So true, so powerful. I know exactly what you're saying. Great work! ~L"
Posted by Lynaes on " *" by Mistress Morbid
- "Aw, beautiful and heart warming. The last line gave a final twist of dreamy tenderness. Lovely work, I must say. :) ~L"
Posted by Lynaes on "Antique Fancy" by Mistress Morbid
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