Comments by Lynaes
- ""euphoric reveries shatter like glass
against your wall of exquisite suffering" such a fantastic line.. I too felt this and it was indeed intense.. so much anguish and belittlement.. Excellent work."
Posted by Lynaes on ""Here birdy-birdy"" by Storm
- "Storm.. this is absolutely incredible.. something special.. a quiet power showered through this as I read it, it's beyond words... the fifth stanza, summed up how I feel, perfectly. Absolutely astounding, I'm truly stunned."
Posted by Lynaes on "Everyone in pain knows how to die..." by Storm
- "So sad, and so true. Portrays the feeling that we need to wrap children up in cotton wool extremely well. Beautiful work. ~L"
Posted by Lynaes on "Lullaby" by Storm
- ""At least then I knew What it was that hurt so much", those lines I can relate to very much. This whole piece is an excellent, vivid description. ~L"
Posted by Lynaes on "Pain Excused" by Storm
