Comments by Mute Serenade
- "This is so brilliantly calming and loving. I think the softness of this piece is breathtaking and really engaging. Great write!"
Posted by Mute Serenade on "Dark Waters" by Meadowhawk
- "Dexedrine was a bipolar drug they plucked from the market because it was stupid addictive. I didn't have bipolar. Also, Hugh Heffner was addicted to it for 30 years... Think cocaine without the come down... Why did they give this shit to kids, lol..."
Posted by Mute Serenade on "Dexedrine" by Mute Serenade
- "This is pretty fantastic, I'm glad it popped to the front page so I could gander at it! I'm also pleased because it's nearly, so nearly my name. I like the premise of your poem request, excellent use of all those words :)"
Posted by Mute Serenade on "...Seepage " by SolApathy
- "Rebs nailed it (like she doooo) ... This is a killer write like always... I know I poke at you about your endings but the ellipsis was totally ok point for this and the flow of it. "My persistence at critical density" - I paused on this line and continued to return to it... A levy nearly broken... And you're sorta both the levy and the force... I hope that makes sense. I love it."
Posted by Mute Serenade on "...Intensity of the Empty" by SolApathy
- "Oh this is just perfect. The rhyme scheme lenda to such a flow, the imagery is on fire... And you end this jam by wrapping it in the most beautiful of bows. This is exquisite fare. Welcome to the fold, Paradoxology, I look forward to reading more from you."
Posted by Mute Serenade on "Dream Alone" by Paradoxology
- "I love the title and the role it's namesake line plays. This is a stunning write, drenched with heart. Young and old, I feel you. The life you lead will often dictate your vitality. Great piece, homie"
Posted by Mute Serenade on "...Threadbare " by SolApathy
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