Comments by Mute Serenade
- "I love the concept of this. Such a short poem, but not a single word wasted or misplaced. Everything here speaks with purpose and it's lovely. You've created imagery from a world away with this one. :) "
Posted by Mute Serenade on "The Ghosts Of Flowers" by carlosjackal
- "And this concludes my journey through the top ten! What a blissful note to finish on. Great imagery... It's great to find something short yet so satisfying. "
Posted by Mute Serenade on "A Butterfly's Soul" by carlosjackal
- "Soul moves the moon. If orbit is a function of time I'd rather believe she's moving that :) beautiful poem."
Posted by Mute Serenade on "Hope" by carlosjackal
- "I don't feel qualified to leave something as meaningful as this deserves. This is beautiful, simply stated. And one of my favorites from you. "
Posted by Mute Serenade on "Searing Blue" by carlosjackal
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