Comments by Mute Serenade

  • "This is sweet and wrought with unrequited longing and beauty. Excellent write, you always bring such life to the pen (or the keyboard, pen sounded prettier) and I'm grateful to read it. "
    Posted by Mute Serenade on "...Testament of the unspoken" by SolApathy
  • "This is pretty fantastic, I'm glad it popped to the front page so I could gander at it! I'm also pleased because it's nearly, so nearly my name. I like the premise of your poem request, excellent use of all those words :)"
    Posted by Mute Serenade on "...Seepage " by SolApathy
  • "We lose the poetry or we lose ourselves... Likely both, depending on the heart condition or season. An excellent ellipsis, as always, sunshine 🌞"
    Posted by Mute Serenade on "...Sorrows of the Lost" by SolApathy
  • "Rebs nailed it (like she doooo) ... This is a killer write like always... I know I poke at you about your endings but the ellipsis was totally ok point for this and the flow of it. "My persistence at critical density" - I paused on this line and continued to return to it... A levy nearly broken... And you're sorta both the levy and the force... I hope that makes sense. I love it."
    Posted by Mute Serenade on "...Intensity of the Empty" by SolApathy
  • "I love the title and the role it's namesake line plays. This is a stunning write, drenched with heart. Young and old, I feel you. The life you lead will often dictate your vitality. Great piece, homie"
    Posted by Mute Serenade on "...Threadbare " by SolApathy
  • "I agree, sometimes the shortest are the most hard hitting. Fantastic as always, I love the constant intensity of your words... Nothing from you ever feels the slightest bit pedestrian, it all packs a punch. "
    Posted by Mute Serenade on "...Fractures" by SolApathy
  • "What beautiful sweetness. A lovely ode and a magical write. One of my favorites from you fo sho. "
    Posted by Mute Serenade on "...Hues " by SolApathy
  • "This is my favorite. Honestly. It's ripe with your style while still feeling like such a departure. I like it's snappy flow as it pounds it's way home. Seriously the best. I love this so hard."
    Posted by Mute Serenade on "...Chaotica " by SolApathy
  • "YESSSSSSSSS. ALL HAIL YHE MASTER OF CHALLENGES! You forgot to mention that the poem also had to be a love letter to the letter you couldn't utter. A three point challenge that you fucking SLAYED. bravo hazaa and many exclamations!!!!!"
    Posted by Mute Serenade on "...Vowels of our bowels " by SolApathy
  • "I love it! loooooove it! Your ending punches with the words, not the pause. Down with pause! Anti-pause! Weight of the words brings this to a close in a symphony of chaos. Rounding all the loud vibrant pieces with a tidy little bow. Yay! Crayola pallid dreams. Love it."
    Posted by Mute Serenade on "...Medley of Resonance" by SolApathy
  • "This resonates with such a sadness... If the Penner is the Penned then let me assure you, you could never disintegrate into the unreal. Ever, ever. Expertly written, as ever and always, friend 😊"
    Posted by Mute Serenade on "…Parabolic Introflection " by SolApathy
  • "I'm going to fever rant for a min.... Maybe I'll see turns me towards the sunshine scribbler variety.... This is the most actionable position... Because to get to the eye means you already traveled half the distance, doesn't it? Before I had my daughter I'd read loads of labor accounts that said labor only began to ease and progress when you give over to the pain. You entirely, unequivocally give up fighting it and just let it happen. So, concession isn't always a bad thing, and journeying once more into the breach isn't either :) yay fever!"
    Posted by Mute Serenade on "...Dire Reflections " by SolApathy
  • "This is magic. This might be one of my favs from you... it also reminds me of the rain scene from V for Vendetta, like that level of intensity? Amazing dude."
    Posted by Mute Serenade on "...Secrets of the rain" by SolApathy
  • "Anna nailed it... Immensely soothing... The imagery here is vivid, calling and beautiful :) excellent excellent write, you sunshine scribbler you ;)"
    Posted by Mute Serenade on "...Azure Dreams" by SolApathy
  • "Bravo.. how to brave to have the foresight and continue anyway. I spent a decade oblivious... Arguably better that way. Passion does cauterize. Beautiful concept that I'll carry long after some of these words fade. Brilliant write."
    Posted by Mute Serenade on "...Cauterized " by SolApathy
  • "*hands sol a blanket* this reminds me of the end of NMH's "oh comely" for some reason.... We're all crawling inside the stomach of winter maybe? Idk. The metaphor escapes me, hahahaha. Awesome piece!"
    Posted by Mute Serenade on "...Fatalities of the Frozen " by SolApathy
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