Comments by flying_fox
- "I admire the way you are able to seemingly write in a casual vernacular 'she even looks hot eating chicken' with such individual and creative prose that makes my heart sing "like obstacles in a steeple chase, I recall lapses in morality,'. Last line blew "
Posted by flying_fox on "MENE, MENE, TEKEL (Three first dates)" by TropicalSnowstorm
- "I am floored by this. you have such flair for mixing simple - and often unspoken - with absolute depth and clarity. Ahhh.. I wish I wish I wish. How I love your mind, TS."
Posted by flying_fox on "Popcorn sandals" by TropicalSnowstorm
- "What I thought was going to be a shameless product plug (my god I must be in marketing) is in fact an insightful and sagacious commentry. You are a marvel."
Posted by flying_fox on "Glade Plug-ins" by TropicalSnowstorm
- "the Picasso/bathroom metaphor is superb... I had to think twice about it. I also love "it’s possible to make love
to the same woman for years
even if they have different faces"... this is an amazing poem. Fox
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Posted by flying_fox on "Romeo Took a Lover" by TropicalSnowstorm
- "wow...amazing write. Cracked up at the Bushmen stanza...then was pulled into the intensity of what's really happening. A really engrossing write. Fox"
Posted by flying_fox on "Dyslexic Postmen" by TropicalSnowstorm
- "love the analogy - it's very fresh, if you'll excuse the pun. No? i wouldn't either. I think Fish hit the nail on the head saying the weariness of the situation comes through. You are very talented. FF"
Posted by flying_fox on "Glade Plug-ins" by TropicalSnowstorm
- "What can I say that won't be rendered rednundant by the myriad of comments you have already received? I loved this too, especially lines like "than the chance to brush against your face". Exquisite. FF"
Posted by flying_fox on "Ugly roses" by TropicalSnowstorm