Comments by girlafraid
- "sometimes, a piece makes me smile even when i don't think it was meant to...but it's only because i see some personal truth within it. this is a lovely reminder of a part of myself...thank you"
Posted by girlafraid on "lines and letters" by Six-Out
- "the first stanza is really powerful...and the rest leads you along a slow, painful road...leaves the reader feeling broken..."
Posted by girlafraid on "[starlight.sonnet]" by Six-Out
- "this life is nothing but what we make it.
and I've made it hopeless-this is so true...so few people actually see that. I can see why you are proud of this work, it is soft and profound...
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Posted by girlafraid on "rain- [a painted cascade]" by Six-Out
- "that last line twisted my brain around for a second...cause it seemed to be going someplace completely different. I like this one alot. it rules :) "
Posted by girlafraid on "I am your dreams:" by Six-Out
- "and somehow- I hate tomorrow. a bookshelf in the corner- i don't know what it is about this line, but i suddenly felt like i understood the stoned mindset you had...and it all came together for that fleeting moment...very cool"
Posted by girlafraid on "ten thousand miles from home" by Six-Out
- "yes i am cool shit! i'm great...bow to me. thank six...it's funny and cool. although i suck at math so i have no idea what the numbers mean. "
Posted by girlafraid on "My Theory on the Girlie" by Six-Out
- "spiritual injustice...it cannot be explained or accepted. i think the only thing this does to you is makes you realize how lucky you are...even if you pity those that aren't...thanks for posting this"
Posted by girlafraid on "Aspyxiation (battle for the truth)" by Six-Out
