Comments by soul_versing

"I can't believe that after all this time I'm finally reading this. I'm torn and speechless... Spectacularly wrought. .hugs.Â "
Posted by soul_versing on "The Multiple Minds of a Fractured Persona " by Just Dave

"Your opening is an attention grabber, and I can appreciate the overwhelmingly regretful tone. Your piece has a nice rhyme scheme and drives deep when you transitioned through raw emotion. And I have to say, I'm actually disappointed in the protagonist, "where's my damn donuts!?" ... . . . . .......don't mind me, infidelity makes me uncomfortable, but aside from that, a mighty fine and structured design. --TG"
Posted by soul_versing on "Wrong Turn" by Just Dave