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Posted by Dark Chocolate on "AND WE DIVED IN THE DROP..." by Dark Chocolate

"Quite a trip. Nice rhyming scheme. Very enchanting, the way I like it. :)"
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "I Wonder " by Dark Chocolate

"Good content. The way the love story is described is really good."
Posted by Anarchist on "A Schizophrenic's Love Story. " by Dark Chocolate

"Hahah! Nice write."
Posted by Void Vortex on "A Schizophrenic's Love Story. " by Dark Chocolate

"Glad that this structure comforted you. :) Sometimes its hard to live with it, sometimes its beautiful to live with it. "
Posted by Dark Chocolate on "A Schizophrenic's Love Story. " by Dark Chocolate

"I definitely relate to this. Very well done. I have not posted mine about schizophrenia yet. Yes I am. "
Posted by Willow Wept on "A Schizophrenic's Love Story. " by Dark Chocolate

"Interesting read, the structure unique as well..very nicely penned "
Posted by River Lily on "A Schizophrenic's Love Story. " by Dark Chocolate

"There's a great sense of imagery in this particular piece, that most seem to lack. Well written, fellow poet "
Posted by RoseTheBrokenHearted on "AND WE DIVED IN THE DROP..." by Dark Chocolate

"Chasing the dragon... an addictive habit. Very well written. I love it... and understand it"
Posted by Unknown on "A Delightful Habit " by Dark Chocolate

"Severely underrated."
Posted by Unknown on "The Shapeshifter ~~~~" by Dark Chocolate

""I heard the smell of the shore, and we tasted petrichor." -- Absolutely enjoyed reading this, particularly said line. Marvelous piece to leave me stuck with mischievous thoughts. Oh and... I had no intention of logging in this morning; that is until I read this, and then I just had to comment --Totally worth it! .tips hat. "
Posted by soul_versing on "AND WE DIVED IN THE DROP..." by Dark Chocolate

""I could hear her dragonfly like eyelashes buzzing, her face felt like a flower was blushing." That created such a wonderful image in my mind. This is a great write :)"
Posted by WitheredRoses on "Mistral " by Dark Chocolate

"This was beautifully penned, fanciful imagery made my mind sing and sway :) much enjoyed hope to read more from you"
Posted by River Lily on "Mistral " by Dark Chocolate

"I enjoyed this, an interesting look at the change of the seasonal "guard". Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on " A December Day. " by Dark Chocolate

"beautiful and brief..loved the word choices..much enjoyed"
Posted by River Lily on " A December Day. " by Dark Chocolate

"I love how short and sweet this is. Very well written. I've always had a love affair with the winter..."
Posted by Unknown on " A December Day. " by Dark Chocolate

"lovely dreaming with eyes open..a dance of thoughts..nicely penned"
Posted by River Lily on "Two syllables' Day. " by Dark Chocolate

"Smart, delicious and colorful. It would make an awesome song, but I think it flows gracefully anyway. "
Posted by Nimue44 on "Two syllables' Day. " by Dark Chocolate

"I giggled at the end, 'And the dragon, she chased me back." Well, no shit, you were chasing it. I really liked, "She kissed my lips, pulled her breath in my lungs." Such a gorgeous verse. -Bows "
Posted by soul_versing on "A Delightful Habit " by Dark Chocolate

"...terse & surreal poetry. can't outrun a dragon..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "A Delightful Habit " by Dark Chocolate

"Good poem even if you are an ex-cig smoker like I.All too mellow a drag for so little it seems.Way better than some commercials I refused to see recently. Å’"
Posted by Ortolan on "The Routine : A Box Of Cigarette " by Dark Chocolate

"Really good, reflective piece."
Posted by carlosjackal on "The Routine : A Box Of Cigarette " by Dark Chocolate

"This is perfect.No other words can describe it, just...perfect.Silence is a beautiful thing, even in the Asylum."
Posted by Lunar Angel on "My Mind is a Mental Asylum " by Dark Chocolate

"This reads very well, rolls right off the tongue with excellent timing. Like a lot."
Posted by Damien on "My Mind is a Mental Asylum " by Dark Chocolate

"The meanings shine the most in this piece artwork, I love reading a poem were it involves questioning ones morals. Thank you for your contribution to poetry. Mrk "
Posted by Unknown on "I Wonder " by Dark Chocolate

"Interesting piece of work. Good play on words"
Posted by Unknown on "I CAN HEAR THEM CALLING !!!! " by Dark Chocolate

"enjoyed the syntax, shows an intellect that when mixed with longing and stark pain creates a striking piece. Sculpted*"
Posted by whisperingwalls on "I CAN HEAR THEM CALLING !!!! " by Dark Chocolate

"I love a poet with a descriptive imagination. I like unique, and you have a style that's unforgettable. -bows"
Posted by soul_versing on "Tale of falling leaves..." by Dark Chocolate

"I was impressed. It got even better and better as I read. Thank you. And great job!"
Posted by Unknown on "Tale of falling leaves..." by Dark Chocolate

"This is beautifully described, made for an entriquing read "
Posted by MissAngelic on "Tale of falling leaves..." by Dark Chocolate

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