Comments by Stephanie Sideways

"Is this Buddhist in its philosophy? Love the structure ..... last word of each line starting the next. Helped massively to create a chanting effect. X"
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Embrace The Nothing" by FearlessDragon

"Very sad musings sweet! Hope you are ok. X "
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Broken Souls" by FearlessDragon

"We are happy one moment, enjoying what we have and counting our small blessings. Then we catch ourselves wanting more, so take a deep breath and make you dreams surround you! X x You are such a deep thinker and I love your reflective poem. "
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Ponder..." by FearlessDragon

"This kept me hooked til the very end. I really enjoyed the way you led us through this . Clever! X x"
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Damsel" by FearlessDragon

"Pit falls and tampered with signs, on out way to True North...... Like the structure.... Alliteration , limited words that say a lot in each stanza, with quite a punch . X x"
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Submissive Suicide" by FearlessDragon

"Enjoy the moment and stop often so as not to miss it!............ X x"
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Stay In The Moment" by FearlessDragon

"This is especially heavy my sweet! I hope your are ok. Back to this poem. I am so saddened by its hopelessness! Lack of any faith. Like Wishing pain to swallow you whole..... Very powerful and I want to read it again and hear its voice! X"
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Wasteland" by FearlessDragon

"Well done my lovely! Clever you! xIt's a great piece, close to your heart! ((((((Hugs))))))! X x x "
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Associated Refillings" by FearlessDragon

"This was as punchy as all the accutely accounted for alliteration! Amazeballs ! Adored it ardently! X x x "
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Kill the King" by FearlessDragon

"I am lying on a beach now. Mmmmm. You took me there and it was very relaxing. Cheers my lovely! :-)"
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "A Meditation" by FearlessDragon

"Great forwards movement I mean. I bobbed up on that first wave, by the way. X"
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Taffy Bullet" by FearlessDragon

"Driving away ........... Into your own head space. Loved the creation of shapes with words that have a strong link throughout. Creating forward movement created by your imagery! Amazballs sweet. X x x"
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Taffy Bullet" by FearlessDragon

"This was great and I really think I totally understood it after the 4th time. Very internal cosmic AKA Internet. Love the last stanza especially. The first stanza is maybe saying that we look into that world so often nowadays ( I get told of my my 'moon' all the time) we can know anything we want really. But those near to us do miss out on our attention. Well that's what I got! ( I am a stickler for interpretation) "
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Cosmic Connection" by FearlessDragon

"It's pure torment! I feel every cell of your frustration! Be patient, be fearless of what you have to endure to be here for her!x xxx"
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Incomplete" by FearlessDragon

"Beautiful flow and rhyme that sit very well with your heartfelt write. Forlorn but done well! X"
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Goodbye" by FearlessDragon

"How many of us truly know how to live outside the superficial. Such an interesting read. Much enjoyed! "
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Mass Cotard Delusion" by FearlessDragon

"This one has reached deep inside me! It may be my fav of yours yet! Maybe two fallen angels? One an angel from the dark side and one who has suffered so badly by the hands of a walking devil! Thrown together to heal each other ...... Really really good ! "
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Creatures of Suffering" by FearlessDragon

"Short, succinct stanza, that reflect your melancholy with ample impact. You seem for a moment tempted by nature but then think better of it at the end. It's like you are walking through the corridors of natures' back stage, then stepping through the the curtains, into your mind, where your performance will begin. ( gosh don't I go on) x"
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Mind" by FearlessDragon

"Love the layout and idea behind this! Stay fearless sweet. If fear is that seed, send in the squirrels to blooming well eat it! "
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "If fear..." by FearlessDragon

"Oh no, they took their life but still they find no peace! How awful! Great but heart wrenching! "
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Purgatory" by FearlessDragon

"I actually read it as self harming. And the ref to music as the relief that the person would feel but it could also be the joy of inflicting pain on others also. Which ever, it was very cleverly done! (Like your picture ;-) ) "
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Requiem (Act I - Prelude)" by FearlessDragon

"So sad, talking us through those last seconds. Beautiful words with a messy thud of reality at the end. X"
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Falling Skies" by FearlessDragon

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