Comments by Stephanie Sideways
- "Your poems echo laws of nature
Laid down soft, at one with paper,
Their flesh may burn and disappear
But beg you leave their souls on here
And when the sky seems fadedblue
I'll click your name and read them through
X x xx"
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "the untidiness handbook" by FadedBlues
- "No paraphernalia , no fancy dressings, no expectations other than to be.... Uncomplicated in simplify......but so very beautiful..... In an undefinable, mind warming quality. X x xx"
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "tapfere Madchen" by FadedBlues
- "The rhyme scheme and flow was flawless and beautiful. But why fire and not' or flight' in that second stanza? Too twee ? To obvious? Was the loss of rhyme enough to indicate the loss of flight. ??
Amazing as always though. !!!! :-) X"
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "name me forsaken" by FadedBlues
- "Precious hearts,.... ice hearts melt, to be replaced, by hearts of glass. Solid glass, or ruby gem? Perhaps it will not shatter then, only chip , or be engraved, polished to shine and glisten, when the heart is saved. X x x x "
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "glass heart" by FadedBlues
- "I can relate to this. This is a sad but at the same time captivating poem. Pretty much all us girl poets wanna slide in that seat opposite, or grab that hand and pull you into that park, or climb that awkward, well of a wall and shout 'hey, there you are' . X x x x"
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "L.one.LY" by FadedBlues
- "Oh that hunger for the feeling of someone new and exciting. Because it is so bad for us, it tastes even better. Another level of honesty, well received! X x x"
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "sex w/whoever" by FadedBlues
- "Beautiful. Really beautiful. The structure was flawless and working in those confines, you produced a wonderful poem. Well done ! X x"
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "sylph lyric" by FadedBlues
- "You captured much in this poem andI thought it reflected the picture really well. The pretence of innocence to catch the victim off guard. T'was a very captivating piece . X x"
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "psyko doll" by FadedBlues
- "Aww. If Frankenstein had gone on to have children, he would indeed feel like this. Unconditional love of the child...... That is the real message being portrayed here, to me. X x"
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Frankenstein's poem" by FadedBlues
- "Pretty flawless rhythm and rhyme, and I fell helplessly in love with the content. She almost had you, but no, ( loving the use of images by the way ) "
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "blue ryder" by FadedBlues
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