Comments by Solace

  • "You won't get this reference likely - reminds me of a Tim Winton short story in his "the turning" collection" it has the same thrust to it - the same effecting stare. "
    Posted by Solace on "Red antlers" by Dancing_Monkey
  • "Necessity does not drive us - we convince ourselves of the necessity and follow through the seemingly logical conclusion. Sanity; what rubric does a man ascribe himself. What moral code is truly universal and standard? Shoot at the sky, but hide underground - buried heads in sand (safety in numbers) The notion of the absurd - the outsider - stranger. We take the bus with them, we hold their hands, we make love to them on cold mornings with the stink of old teeth and stale fluoride. Ridicule is the ridiculous reaching outside themselves in order to maintain the status quo within themselves. We make ourselves from little nothings, and we are mighty amongst our equally inferior brethren. "We barely remember, who or what came before..." Apologies for the tedious length of my comment."
    Posted by Solace on "Eye Shards." by Dancing_Monkey
  • "A house can only truly be haunted, when the life within it impresses upon it that quality - the quality of living - and the horrors that come with just that. The stories they could tell, fathomless. "
    Posted by Solace on "Forced Precision" by Dancing_Monkey
  • "asking, begging for understanding, - how can we give it to you? and did the pills cause, or give excuse to it, all the milestones become weights with which to drown us, and that band another amongst"
    Posted by Solace on "Forced Precision" by Dancing_Monkey
  • "Gentleman, are gentlemanly, but they're consummate liars too - every avenue is its own vision, its own little indelible indiction and production - what melody is the melody of the flesh pray tell we ask? You're leaning over the bar"
    Posted by Solace on "Forced Precision" by Dancing_Monkey
  • "The precision is forced, it doesn't come by effortless weightlessness airy fairy namby pandering - honesty never did, it comes like a raging torrent, and hits like that whip. Quick decisions - night tables and honesty"
    Posted by Solace on "Forced Precision" by Dancing_Monkey
  • "I beg you, pleading precisely a feeling that needs to be fed - then a melvillesque, they hung him up, freakin' hung him up and he died - i'd like that on my back man. That in/fidelity moment fantastic"
    Posted by Solace on "Forced Precision" by Dancing_Monkey
  • "Its a homage and a truth amongst lies - you get what you asked for - so is it worth paying or not? you might just have to taste it to be sure..."
    Posted by Solace on "Gatekeepers Bribe" by Dancing_Monkey
  • "We each have our masks, and those memoir's of childlike abandon stay with you forever, nostalgia syndrome and desire become symbolic of another greater desire - the conclusion - oh the conclusion"
    Posted by Solace on "Gatekeepers Bribe" by Dancing_Monkey
  • "But I wish we'd all be able to sit around and hear Homer sung as it was sung, and Grimm coming to life with nothing but words - lies, but so beautiful as to be better than any truth"
    Posted by Solace on "Gatekeepers Bribe" by Dancing_Monkey
  • "But they're useful in the compulsion - building beautiful nothings - despite the fact that every boy is a boyscout: really? Campfires are still an important feature of even modern culture, we just don't tell as interesting tales"
    Posted by Solace on "Gatekeepers Bribe" by Dancing_Monkey
  • "ha! Feels like you and the captain have been dancing too often together, and its all bribery, every moment is more of it - the actuality of changed positions, of the nature of enslavement - the lies are all that is true"
    Posted by Solace on "Gatekeepers Bribe" by Dancing_Monkey
  • "You walk with a tinge of traditionalism, and a speckle of new wisdom - fresh eyes on old things - a marriage i adorn with my praise..."
    Posted by Solace on "Joked Heel" by Dancing_Monkey
  • "What to say? Where to disseminate, extrapolate, perhaps i'll just procrastinate? Pedestrian meditation i thought at first, this caterpillar smiles"
    Posted by Solace on "Joked Heel" by Dancing_Monkey
  • "I come here so often; and leave so few words - what words could be left; not worldessness for that is silence - but perhaps an inability of expression - of complete conception...unknowing..."
    Posted by Solace on "Come Sweet Unknown." by Dancing_Monkey
  • "Whatfor this smile upon my face as i dazed in the dappled dawn of your words... Can't help but grin dumbly at this monkey, and that in itself is a compliment :)"
    Posted by Solace on "Fruitless." by Dancing_Monkey
  • "*slap* you crazy monkey, you...Few capture my attention these days...I've become an elitist in the halls of Dp, refusing to dole out my time to any who i dont appreciate...You have my time :)"
    Posted by Solace on "Pulse" by Dancing_Monkey
  • ""You gave to withdraw" "New age has begone" "Mold my inner ryhme" Stuck with these phrases, these reference points to satiate my desire for something more than mundane, something profound..."
    Posted by Solace on "Pulse" by Dancing_Monkey
  • "Hell yeah! See behind the veil, open your mind, think for yourself, question authority...Nothing sings better than the song of freedom...Nothing hurts worse than the opression of that ideal..."
    Posted by Solace on "a paper filled alley" by Dancing_Monkey
  • "I race my hand... Fractured and yet my mind takes heed and wanders/ponders on so much over so little, little in the way of length, but with so much more inside the words, inside the meaning"
    Posted by Solace on "Homogeneous presence" by Dancing_Monkey
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