Comments by Alanarchy

  • "Jesus fucking christ, those first three lines... That's exactly where I be."
    Posted by Alanarchy on "neoprene." by Six-Out
  • "Oh, Jon. Oh man. As you read, it's like your stuck in a car that went over a bridge, and every word is another inch of cold water through the cracks in the windshield... Waterboarded with heartache... That last stanza is a total murder. Cuts so close. I feel you, brother. Much love. Write on."
    Posted by Alanarchy on "when ten is twelve." by Six-Out
  • "Fuck you for writing this. Thank you for writing this. "for the first time in your you're utterly lost." Heartbreak sucks. It sucks. I would rather run into traffic then go through this again. Seriously. Thanks for this."
    Posted by Alanarchy on "until you can't anymore." by Six-Out
  • "I've been away for a couple of weeks now, and there could be no better welcome back than this. The first half was thoroughly perfect. Yes, your pen is Jesus."
    Posted by Alanarchy on "wake up, dreamer." by Six-Out
  • "All I can do is echo tania. This is bottled beauty. Tastes like Disarono, but hits you harder than 151. Saphire is one of my favorite words."
    Posted by Alanarchy on "she spoke sapphire" by Six-Out
  • "Reminds me of a Thursday song. "And she's speaking is starless skies like a migician that's lost their touch" One of my all time favorite lines. This whole thing vibed. Excellent, brother mamma jamma."
    Posted by Alanarchy on "she spoke obsidian" by Six-Out
  • "You truly have one of the most powerful voices in writing, that I've found. This one stomped around in my mind like a lyrical behemoth. I'm digging the hell out of this piece, dude. "
    Posted by Alanarchy on "she spoke sepia." by Six-Out
  • "It get's to me sometimes. It's almost a blessing AND a curse. Sorta like Spiderman :D You always hit the mark man. Always, and never leave me wanting more, wishing the work would just keep going at the same time. Excellent."
    Posted by Alanarchy on "hopelessly.poetic." by Six-Out
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