Comments by Alanarchy

  • "I'll come back and comment better. I'm gutshot at the moment. This was so good."
    Posted by Alanarchy on "Us" by JustAnEarlyBird
  • "When a well-wish, or condolences sounds like cursing. A smell of flowers that changes what the smell of flowers means to you forever. Time heals. But what good can that do for a person who is forced motionless while time goes on without them? Snowstorm nailed it: SURREAL. But also too real. Feels so personal. I almost didn't comment. But I've been to that valley. And so I say thank you, and please write on. I'm a fan."
    Posted by Alanarchy on "Endless Loop" by JustAnEarlyBird
  • "I wish I had a penny for all the times I've wished... That it was as easy as opening up a panel on the back of my lover's head. Just a quick tinker. Uncross a few wires. Reconnect a few gears... To see the functions as a diagram, and truly understand why we don't simply "machine" together. I'm good with my hands. Unfortunately, I say and think stupid shit all the time. Lol. You've probably noticed that by now xD Thank you for sharing. Write on."
    Posted by Alanarchy on "Make Up Your Mind" by JustAnEarlyBird
  • "I have lived as a dandelion seed. I've been picked up by a force I couldn't control, and placed down where I wasn't wanted. Where I didn't want to be. I fought the wind. Sometimes I still do. I lose less often now. I've withered a bit with... Wisdom? We'll call it that- I don't feel green. But I feel my roots. Color is a trick of the light... I tend to interpret in a selfish way. There's a lot here. Many doors. More like the spaces between trees in the woods. Write on. "
    Posted by Alanarchy on "I Am" by JustAnEarlyBird
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