Comments by purr_verse

  • "Excellent imagery here, and I love the distantly-analytical-yet-not conclusion...if that makes sense, which it may well not. Hmm. Despite my inability to express it properly, this is a great piece."
    Posted by purr_verse on "and the roses were polaroid" by Six-Out
  • "One word and some more: 1) Wow! That's a fantastic tatt. 2) Wow! That's a marvellous piece of writing. And 3) Wow! Your hair's got damn long. :D"
    Posted by purr_verse on "ink.fiend" by Six-Out
  • "From the opening line, this was magnificent. Please like it in the morning. It's got a nice little star next to it... *faves*"
    Posted by purr_verse on "-sympathetic" by Six-Out
  • "fantastic write; the formatting and construction superb, and so excellently powerful. the "nothing/everything you wish" duality was particularly well done. *applauds*"
    Posted by purr_verse on "I am your dreams:" by Six-Out
  • "there's just something about 3am - disquieting moments... The concluding couplet is outstanding. "tasting midnight and nearly graspinig forever" - marvellous. Talent undeniable; awesome write."
    Posted by purr_verse on "riverside reveries. -a lucid goodbye" by Six-Out
  • "Well, this is my fourth visit now to this piece and I still can't get a decent comment to form. Wonderfully powerful piece, metaphor within metaphor very impressively done... I love the opening line; could quote too much. Excellent."
    Posted by purr_verse on "Circle Yes or No" by Six-Out
  • "great conclusion, with a powerful and cleverly woven metaphor both there and throughout this deeply saddening write. Wonderfully crafted, of course. Great stuff, sir. :)"
    Posted by purr_verse on "David & Goliath" by Six-Out
  • "an astonishingly powerful piece, with so many excellent phrases and evocations that i'm hard-pressed to quote a favourite line...perhaps "superficticious in a world of lies"... Awesome work."
    Posted by purr_verse on "god's kiss/ a passion of the past" by Six-Out
  • "this brought tears to my eyes. absolutely wonderful depth of emotion, expressed beautifully, subtly, clearly... poignant and hopeful and just an outstanding piece of writing. *small ovation* (i only have one set of hands, or i'd be louder.) "
    Posted by purr_verse on "travel the disaster [there's always tomorrow]" by Six-Out
  • "powerful write indeed, with fantastic driving pace... Damn excellent."
    Posted by purr_verse on "acrid" by Six-Out
  • "wraps itself up gloriously; "on a splintered summer morning" - love this image... "licking my wounds _with your tongue of ::salt" - extremely powerful; perfectly bitter; great write."
    Posted by purr_verse on "-tears. of_ lead" by Six-Out
  • ""maybe understand or stand under and overturn" - this is just fantastic. deeply melancholy piece still with a hint of hope; the third-last line is also particularly excellent."
    Posted by purr_verse on "Once Upon a Sometime" by Six-Out
  • ""tomorrow was just a myth"...that line really holds me; i like its paradox... excellent piece that stands up to much re-reading; as always, fine quality wordsmithery from your hand. great conclusion too, by the way."
    Posted by purr_verse on "Evolution Theory [1-5]" by Six-Out
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