Comments by purr_verse
- "Excellent to see a new post from you; your command of rhythm and metre always magnificent - this pulses and draws the reader in marvellously. Great write. I love the middle stanza in particular."
Posted by purr_verse on "The Dead Above Ground" by Stormcomin
- "this is excellent; i can't help but hear music behind it. Cre's right - your rhyme scheme again is immaculate... the "From journey..." couplet outstanding. Great stuff."
Posted by purr_verse on "Hell's Concern" by Stormcomin
- "heheh...such is my musical taste that the first thing I thought of was the band Mayhem... But I knew the association aside from that. Either way, I liked it. >:)"
Posted by purr_verse on "Where Silence Is Forbidden" by Stormcomin
- "hell yes! The "I speak to death..." couplet is fan-fkkn-tastic. Reminded me of Martin Walkyier's lyrics (Sabbat/Skyclad), and that's high praise from me indeed. >:) Excellent."
Posted by purr_verse on "Being Of Shadow" by Stormcomin
- "ooh, impressive metre! I especially appreciated that you didn't get 'stuck' in one form of rhyme scheme, but nor did you chop and change needlessly, thus losing effect. Very well written piece; reads like a dark chant somehow. Welcome to DP. :) "
Posted by purr_verse on "Bury My Heart With Demons" by Stormcomin
