Comments by purr_verse
- "A great deal of this is wonderful: I think the last stanza loses metre a little, but not enough to detract too much from what is overall an excellent ride. Fast-paced and cleverly structured; fine write! I'm hypercritical of rhyme, too. This is very nicely crafted."
Posted by purr_verse on "Fantasy & Ecstasy" by Echoes of Orpheus