Comments by MercyRain

"i do think this could be a freaking awesome poem, its just the ending leaves one feeling like there is something amiss here"
Posted by MercyRain on "Rain & Jazz in Rm 272" by shortandpretentious

"all this talk about love keeping us dry and whatnot, but then the only real emotion the narrator shows herself is the spiteful wishing that the girl with the umbrella would get wet and then the narrator stays dry despite her only displayed emotion as spite"
Posted by MercyRain on "Rain & Jazz in Rm 272" by shortandpretentious

"i have mixed feelings about this poem... the rhythm, the flow, the wording, all that, it is an excellent write... it is just the last two lines of this poem though that seem to let me confused..."
Posted by MercyRain on "Rain & Jazz in Rm 272" by shortandpretentious