Comments by BetaWolfinVA
- "ohh wow... "and the ways you failed to find me beautiful" that line touched me deeply, goood ending to... fuck it, nothing i can say will do it justice..."
Posted by BetaWolfinVA on "Sea Foam" by Dei
- "i loved this... 'tis any thing but "crappy" well done... "
Posted by BetaWolfinVA on "Pen. " by Dei
- "I realized what it was... right before the authors note... "mama" gave it away... (it took me that long...)
very well done, Loved reading this :)"
Posted by BetaWolfinVA on "She was Life. I was Living. " by Dei
- "on great eloquence much depends, simple words more warming than a blanket, and their absense more chilling than ice"
Posted by BetaWolfinVA on "Exhaled Exultations" by Dei
- "The last stanza is beatiful, sounds like the one that this is about did a lot of drinking and left you to deal with the consequences? Parent or Husband, or Significant other?"
Posted by BetaWolfinVA on "Sea Salt" by Dei
- "I love how you wrote this... the words and cadence is different, but the feeling is too familiar... some times i feel like teh only thing i write is similar poems, over and over... its good to see someoen elses words on it :)"
Posted by BetaWolfinVA on "Amantes Sunt Amentes" by Dei
- "wow, how did i not comment on this in november... loved it, and inspired me to write http://www.darkpoetry.com/node/work/170254... amazing what tricks you learn over time..."
Posted by BetaWolfinVA on "The Invention of Goodbye" by Dei
