Comments by stormtalk
- "I know the thought, I know the feeling... and a powerful one it is. Nice work articulating it in a grasping way."
Posted by stormtalk on "H2O (r)" by shadowsinthelight
- "I've seen what heroin can do, and it's nasty stuff... but you write about it well. My one sweeping criticism for most of your writing is that the ABAB rhyme scheme holds you back."
Posted by stormtalk on "HORSE (a heroin poem)" by shadowsinthelight
