Comments by xZombie Poptartzx

  • "This was very deep and intense. Sometimes we feel like we just get to the point where there isn't possibly anymore we can take, but i like to believe that we are never given more than we are able to handle in life. I hope everything is okay. This was very well written xoxo"
    Posted by xZombie Poptartzx on "WritingMyOwnEnding" by NarcissusNarcosis
  • "Haha.. I used to read the dictionary for fun when i was younger... it's sad.I need to brush up on my vocabulary for sure... This was awesome though, I enjoyed it and I knew all the words *self-five* ;p xoxo"
    Posted by xZombie Poptartzx on "Sex With A Dictionary!" by NarcissusNarcosis
  • "I know how this feels.. For the last 2-3 months i've been in this depressed rut and i can't seem to get the fuck out of it.. "Do you ever get so tired that you can't even sleep anxiety and nervous wired through bloodshot eyes, the world is bleak..." that part especially.. i know exactly what thats like. being tired as fuck but laying there with your eyes closed for hours not being able to sleep... it gets to the point where sleeping pills wont even do the trick. Nice write,, i feel ya xoxo"
    Posted by xZombie Poptartzx on "Vicious Cycle" by NarcissusNarcosis
  • "Very deep... The ending was a bit unexpected. "plagiaristic and falsified unity bathing in your perceived impunity You will die alone melting on your unrepentant throne..." I loved those lines.... Often we are our own worst enemies... iknow i've spent a great deal of time hating myself. xoxo"
    Posted by xZombie Poptartzx on "Incubus Mentality" by NarcissusNarcosis
  • "What a lovely place this sounds like! I don't think i could handle peyote though xD "my spaceship was broken after the first day been too high to fix it, but I must say I have no complaints, I love this place.." best ending ever! good stuff Nar xoxo"
    Posted by xZombie Poptartzx on "NaRCoSiS" by NarcissusNarcosis
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