Comments by xZombie Poptartzx

  • "I will own you soon" Mmm...yes. lol i loved that last line...it made me want to read this again from a totally different perspective xoxo"
    Posted by xZombie Poptartzx on "pagan eyes!" by FadedBlues
  • "Beautifully written... I think this is my favorite by you so far! "count the nights, and remember that under the sheets we only shared the selfish yearnings of the flesh." that past was breathtaking... and your finish..."do not imprison me, nor call me lover – what have I ever been for you? nothing more than a shadow on your heart…" perfection... There would have been no better way to end this piece. amazing stuff :) xoxo"
    Posted by xZombie Poptartzx on "the night calls" by FadedBlues
  • "Beautifully written... We read about "harlots" quite often, but not much about what they do/think or feel after they sneak out of the hotel and back to their place where they're left alone and just simply sad. Great job, i could really picture her... xoxo"
    Posted by xZombie Poptartzx on "glory of harlots" by FadedBlues
  • "This was beautiful. I loved your comparison to keeping your house as the leaves and shells scattered on a beach. If I didn't live with someone who was OCD i'd probably do the same. "Messy/Unorganized" isn't dirty... xoxo great piece."
    Posted by xZombie Poptartzx on "the untidiness handbook" by FadedBlues
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