Comments by midnights voice
- "Sometimes certain situations and emotions can be hard to put into words or expressed . I feel this is one of those moments that o e cannot relate to until it slaps you in the face . Don't worry about changing it for then it is not original . Leave it as is and go to your next poem . And along the way you will get better at expressing those deep ingrained emotions that cause us to write poetry ."
Posted by midnights voice on "Atop the Land of Diamonds/To Sink or not to Swim" by Candy Cain
- "Many images that are hard for the reader to relate to though they can be easily visualized . This is one that the reader would have to had been there to appreciate . But the feeling of mentalking exhaustion comes through loud and clear . Would have like to hear the music too ."
Posted by midnights voice on "Atop the Land of Diamonds/To Sink or not to Swim" by Candy Cain
- "I picture Chesterfield Bennington , lead singer of Linkin Park in this work . But it could be so many more . Their ups and downs are what atracts us to them . It was more than they could bear ."
Posted by midnights voice on "dead by sunrise" by Candy Cain
- "Maybe it's best to just feel this one than try to understand this one . Great line "Her habitat inhabits her.""
Posted by midnights voice on "Untitled" by Candy Cain
