Comments by Melancholic VIncent
- "Great writing! I just want you to highlight some errors you gave, for self-learning. Watch out for "Peacefull", "ungreatfull", it should be said "Peaceful" and "ungrateful". Hope you didn't mind, it is for the sake of self-learning.
Continue on the path of poetry"
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Silent Master" by darkheartmagic