Comments by Nehema

" I think we should all be allowed to write our own ending. I love you, see you on the flipside - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "WritingMyOwnEnding" by NarcissusNarcosis

"We pick our battles though sometimes it feels like they are picking us. This was full of contradictions that help drive the point home, made me feel like you're surrounded by conundrums. Though demons are usually thought of as bad, they offer the only solace we can accept at times. Love your easy flow freestyle *hugs* - XXOO "
Posted by Nehema on "Date Rape Psychosis" by NarcissusNarcosis

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Posted by Nehema on "Sex With A Dictionary!" by NarcissusNarcosis

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Posted by Nehema on "Sex With A Dictionary!" by NarcissusNarcosis

"I know I get tired of thesaurus abuser poetry, so I just don't read that shit cuz I prefer relevant modern work. Though a good vocabulary is important :) yours seems full to me. You're beautiful baby - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "Sex With A Dictionary!" by NarcissusNarcosis

"A new favorite, wow...that last stanza brought it all together and made me choke. I wanna say more, much more about the depth of raw emotion this piece invokes, ...maybe later - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "Air-Conditioned Hell" by NarcissusNarcosis

"Knowing yourself is, especially the darkside, is very important. This is beautifully written in your wonderful freestyle, p.o.y. - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "Incubus Mentality" by NarcissusNarcosis

"This shows so much more depth and more emotion than what you've previously posted. I love your work because it expresses emotion, sometimes trauma, but it doesn't beg for attention its just accepted. I hope you let us see more angles. I agree with kourtni, this is more vulnerable, and for me that makes it more beautiful - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "Lethe Enigma" by NarcissusNarcosis

"Woooooww... You have officially impressed me beyond what I had hoped. Thank you for this. That last line screams volumes...hope - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "The Terminal Disease of Nature" by NarcissusNarcosis

"Omg...I just came... I wonder if you ever get tired of hearing that? Lmao, you are amazing. Past, present and can't wait for the future... Contrarian...lmao - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "(Cult)iVAtioN" by NarcissusNarcosis

"Another classic, I think "but I'm just dropping ice cubes all along the floor so I can step in water at the end of the day..." is my favorite line because it shows that you plan to make it through the day. Ever the optimist, I want you to make it through till something changes and you no longer need to drop ice cubes... - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "The Dark, Bottomless Pit of Depression" by NarcissusNarcosis

"Or Vicious Cycle....mmmmm"
Posted by Nehema on "Stained-Glass House" by NarcissusNarcosis

""no hero's left to hear me sing, they've all gone deaf from my screams" I'm so glad you re-posted this one too, my second fav from before. May I request Bouncy Ball Insanity too? I'm really glad to see these, I am enjoying remembering why you were an instant classic - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "Stained-Glass House" by NarcissusNarcosis

"This is the NN I love to read, raw n real with unique freestyle verses heaped on top of each other making the mind follow you to your abyss. Dark yet deeply felt truth - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "From Atop the Ledge..." by NarcissusNarcosis

"We all have demons, or daemons, they are very real, but really only as powerful as we make them. This sounds like you are feeding yours and you have amazing strength. Your ability to capture the emotion of what that's like and how it can affect your mental state and cause you to affect others is what sets your work apart. Good job once again - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "The Daemon Inside Me..." by NarcissusNarcosis

"Thank you for reposting this one, truly my favorite and after reading it again today I realized why. Not just because of the awesome structure and clever wording, the message speaks to the decisions I've made in my life over the past couple years. This is why I keep reading - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "Mechanicophobia" by NarcissusNarcosis

"There's so much here and all tied together in back passageways. I've read it 3 times and I get something new each time. Truly a masterpiece dripping with cleverness and speaks volumes to the human condition, from trying to rule and control on every level to being ones own worst enemy. Using 'characters' that have meaning on every level whether people have read the original Alice, studied tarot, played poker or not, there is something here for everyone on at least one level. Your talent will never cease to turn me on - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "The Red Queen and The Suicide King" by NarcissusNarcosis

"When genius plays with dark comedy + wit = instant classic. You are one of a kind baby - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "CSI Porn" by NarcissusNarcosis

""So just relax... let your head sink under the water... then take a deep breath.... Hold it... Hold it..... Hold it.........." - Fuck yes, brilliant rant. I wanna put a brick on this person's chest just in case they can't hold it - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "Hold your breath..." by NarcissusNarcosis

"A perfect reentry piece. It expresses so much of who you are and shows off your skills beautifully. I'm only one of many who are or are gonna be very happy to have your unique talent back on this site. Love you baby, welcome home - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "Color Me..." by NarcissusNarcosis