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  • "So delicately phrased. Grief as unhomed love… just a perfect punctuation mark to a life."
    Posted by Adagios on "westling" by Feral
  • "Grief has the potential to wield considerable influence at times, a powerful tool indeed."
    Posted by LIFEINVADER on "westling" by Feral
  • "This reads so authentic and sincere and hits far to close to home right now, damn. The best of well wishes to you Feral. Beautifully written."
    Posted by Skye on "westling" by Feral
  • "And a bookmark. This unique and articulate piece of stunning poetry deserves nothing less."
    Posted by carlosjackal on "westling" by Feral
  • "This is such a beautiful and powerful dedication / eulogy, words fail me, other than to wish youlove and condolences."
    Posted by carlosjackal on "westling" by Feral
  • "Beautiful, complex and astounding. This is more than bloodwork. This is the inner workings of photons both of this earth and the cosmos."
    Posted by carlosjackal on "eleni adnasci " by Feral
  • "Incredible. It's difficult to comment on words such as these without sounding like a fool in awe of this classic, beautiful bloodwork."
    Posted by carlosjackal on "xvii: evaporite" by Feral
  • "The way you weave words reminds me of of an old Dybbuk, who was at best an amazing writer and at worst an amazing writer. "
    Posted by Skye on "xvii: evaporite" by Feral
  • "I love your passionate expression of gratitude for the gift of life and the sheer wonder of our fragile and ephemeral existence. In the closing lines you speak like a lover. Ooh and a megalodon tooth? ... much envy"
    Posted by kinkifrog on "swan song for a sabertooth " by Feral
  • "Hm. I do remember that feeling, when I was a kid.. that feeling of peace and calm. No worries, there were none until shit happened later on. Adult me latches onto that and cherishes the times when that kid still believed."
    Posted by Skye on "swan song for a sabertooth " by Feral
  • "That last line is everything. Then the color adds to the feel of this. "
    Posted by Drea on "ascian" by Feral
  • "It's a powerful thing when you know what you want. This poem rings well with me, it's a dark ode to finding serenity, at least to me. "
    Posted by Skye on "ascian" by Feral
  • "Everything really works here, actually the structure is pretty good and the topic on point. Cheers."
    Posted by LIFEINVADER on "ascian" by Feral
  • "This is so beautiful, so heavy..The weight of grief cracked by those tiny chinks of light that bring hope, little by little. Wonderfully written and packed with incredible power."
    Posted by carlosjackal on "widow weeping endymion" by Feral
  • "Consider this an attempt to cultivate something like an objective intuition...: Nocturnal hued sand, darkness, darkness, the lisp and lap of wavering waters, oceans of dense darkness, darkness, the incontrovertible depths of the unknown. Great stores of molecular motion! …flickering and faltering upon their endless transmutations, interior species of light, orbiting, orbiting, gravitationally bound to such renowned hearts that called out from within. Called out and never left; sustenance of soul. And, like a brush stroke across the landscape, a seemingly frivolous fog; the howling of history emerging from it’s arterial winds. Wheeling round, we find a geologic curiosity, petal, pistil and stamen perk their bony heads, full of wonderment and wile, a juxtaposition of fervent feeling. And suddenly, out of the soil of their abode, rising forcefully like the white walls of Gondor… the towering cliffs of equanimity, sure to tempt one’s heart toward humility. Straining with upward glance one can see, or more closely feel a vast arboreal wilderness heaving itself upon the world, and trickling through its kaleidoscope of leaves the distinct laughter of youth. Playful, like call and response it rises and falls, an invitation that beckons. Come, come, we have being yet to discover. Celestial bodies, slow burn of stars, galactic agape, how can you possibly speak my name? Godhead of the universe, eternal internal flow, whispers into your dream state… am I not all that you ever are…? ~b "
    Posted by blue on "iii. mythos of interiority" by Feral
  • "Ugggh. Your words have gotten no less sharp with time... and they cut ever too deeply still. Nice knife, Feral. We're all waiting, we just don't know for what..."
    Posted by Skye on "iii. mythos of interiority" by Feral
  • "I'm not sure if this comment belongs to 'Hex' , I keep swinging back and forwards between the two and wondering at the connection"
    Posted by kinkifrog on "xviii: evocation" by Feral
  • "a painful catalyst jolting the consciousness , awe and rapture wrapped in a primal cloak , strong and transformational words from a true survivor , wonderful . worthy and deserving of success xxx "
    Posted by kinkifrog on "xviii: evocation" by Feral
  • "A sobering fight and desire fitted to strong lines. When they tell you you can't... reply... 'Watch me." Well done."
    Posted by NikesRain on "xvi: Hex" by Feral
  • "A cue to remind us to cherish and express our love and feelings to those we care about before it's too late..."
    Posted by LIFEINVADER on "a graceless elegy" by Feral
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