Comments by sheff
- "I love him so much
that I could easily.
find his jawbone ,
buried within a pile
of broken skulls
crawling on my hands and knees
in the dark .
For me this was pounding. Enough of the poem. The 2nd bit, while good, draws away from the power of the 1st. But the first.. bravo.
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Posted by sheff on "I cross languages " by Corinthian
