Comments by All Members
- "i really enjoyed this, very creative imagery of someone restoring an antique. "It is older than itself, older than each bit
that makes up its whole
But held onto and held dear over time" - just one of many great lines that stuck with me."
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Reflections from the workshop " by ebonyamore
- "*sigh*....this is beautiful...I wish I had more adjectives at this point...but you've left me high and dry...this is beautiful."
Posted by Unknown on "once upon a time..." by ebonyamore
- "I'm so deeply lost in words right now. Your heart and mind painted a breathtaking scene of young hopeless romantics. Your words cling tight to me and I shall cherish every bit of them, such a beautiful disaster. Bows-"
Posted by soul_versing on "once upon a time..." by ebonyamore
- "A well deserved "Poem of the Day". This piece expressex raw emotion that draws such an electrifying image...that lasts in the circle of memories. Thank you for your impart."
Posted by Unknown on "stained devotion" by ebonyamore
- ""And I'm afraid that all I ever was
was dry leaves and kindling
flying at you in a stiff wind
urgently trying to blow out your wrath
but winding up igniting myself and inciting your fireworks
too passionate in my hope to subdue, really only able to subsume
until we're both consumed
with no hope of escape until the many fuels, and we, are spent."
Highly Favored Lines
Your words have such an Impressive force. This work was truly stunning and inspiring. Thank you for your Impart..."
Posted by Unknown on "All you never needed" by ebonyamore
- "what a beautifully, sad poem. very well thought out...each line flowing with the pain of separation and need."
Posted by natalie on "Achilles embrace" by ebonyamore
- ""Lick the throbbing neon pink signs that blink your name a thousand times a minute."
That was BRILLIANT. This was excellent. Usually, I can't go deeper in erotica than what it is, but this took me way down to a place up and underneath. I loved it."
Posted by Unknown on "I said I loved you..." by ebonyamore
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