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  • "thanks for sharing this touching piece of work. i know what it feel like to see a loved one suffer from cancer. i felt the heaviness and sadness"
    Posted by Unknown on "angel in the details" by Armand
  • "This poem is brutally succinct - leaving no wriggle room - the reader simply cannot look away. A powerful accomplishment I must say though...the compacted version that arrived in my e-mail as poem of the day might actually be the slightly better format. Either way....an outstanding poem :-)"
    Posted by Leineco on "angel in the details" by Armand
  • ""for I know I will not love like this again". This made me thankful for not having to have experienced that emotion..or not quite. Intense, the binding of past and present was smooth and rich. The eroticism didn't get in the way, it added to it- I like that."
    Posted by Unknown on "reflections of an old flame" by Armand
  • "Amazing. I can't believe I'm writing a comment to a guy who doesn't even post here anymore. It's too good not to. Tragic and gut wrenching. I feel I have been here before."
    Posted by Dominic on "The Final Curtain" by Armand
  • "this is pretty funny, but then it takes a more serious turn and that's great too. i think that if more bullied kids could read this, it would probably have a lot of them thinking more about what it really means to commit suicide."
    Posted by Unknown on "Suicide: a lesson in economics" by Armand
  • "it would seem the talent for words runs deep in your family... this had an easy flow and read with a sharp sting all through without losing momentum or feel... excellent first post and welcome to dp"
    Posted by NikesRain on "The Skies Wept Infernal " by Armand
  • "Falling and falling and falling...yes. Great piece. Welcome to the Dark Poetry, Jonathan. Glad to have you. Hopefully your father will grace us with his presence from time to time as well."
    Posted by Amaryllis on "The Skies Wept Infernal " by Armand
  • "Vai is one of my favorites! ...he has been a strong inspiration for my guitar skills during the last decade ....thanks for the view!!!"
    Posted by Opklot on "BACKSTAGE WITH STEVE VAI" by Armand
  • "...So many things running through my mind after reading both your write and the comments under it. I personally am not wired in the suicide direction...more the opposite really. I can see how this might have an impact on many people out there, but not on the ones that need the swift kick this delivers. As you stated yourself, they are selfish. Thoughts of self only. nothing about the others this action will affect. They have pulled the blinders of pain over their eyes and refuse to take them off. Very expressive write. I enjoyed it immensly."
    Posted by Winter Born on "Suicide: a lesson in economics" by Armand
  • "still a very powerful, perfectly subtly understated piece; you're still among my best-of-the-bests, sir."
    Posted by purr_verse on "mourning rain" by Armand
  • "choose life.. sounds like a movie.. Choose life. Choose a job. Choose a career. Choose a family. Choose a fucking big television, Choose washing machines, cars, compact disc players, and electrical tin openers. Choose good health, low cholesterol and dental insurance. Choose fixed- interest mortgage repayments. Choose a starter home. Choose your friends. Choose leisure wear and matching luggage. Choose a three piece suite on hire purchase in a range of fucking fabrics. Choose DIY and wondering who you are on a Sunday morning. Choose sitting on that couch watching mind-numbing sprit- crushing game shows, stuffing fucking junk food into your mouth. Choose rotting away at the end of it all, pishing you last in a miserable home, nothing more than an embarrassment to the selfish, fucked-up brats you have spawned to replace yourself. Choose your future. Choose life... But why would I want to do a thing like that? --trainspotting-- yeah. i absolutely love this poem of yours. you're a very smart cynic. o_o"
    Posted by boundandfallen on "Suicide: a lesson in economics" by Armand
  • "You have an intense ability to bring envoke emotions here. I could smell what you were smelling and feel what you were feeling. My favorite lines were "Of roads to take And best not taken." Very nice! The poems was very erotic and emotional and truly left me wanting to know why you two arent together, what happened? A good read always leaves you wanting more and this did! "
    Posted by brokenbandagedbetter on "reflections of an old flame" by Armand
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