Comments by DoctorAsh
- "Beautiful write as always ... and goddamn .... the lines "tears that dry on the surface of a dream" took away my virginity once again. [Purple thoughts] Lovely Read. [D&A]"
Posted by DoctorAsh on "....b.e.f.o.r.e the sun set" by diavolessa
- "ooo .... i likie, I LIKIE; Its like the very first bite into a freshly baked piece of brand new yummie happy pizzia: Yummie Write: [D&A]"
Posted by DoctorAsh on "glass realm" by diavolessa
- "Clever wording . i didnt directly see the subliminal shield that you hung over this poem ... but im sure tonite while im sleeping, it will crawl up into my conscience an scare me .. Beautiful work "
Posted by DoctorAsh on "A ticket, please..." by diavolessa
- "ah, a delightful pronouned discriptive emotional trap, consealed in an unsealed box of marbles floating into an empty sheet of plastic memories folded ,... nice
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Posted by DoctorAsh on "Did you know...?" by diavolessa
- "ah ... one more to add the favs .. what a good stronge pointer finger you have .. push it hard into they're eyes until they bleed buckets of nothing .. sit on a stool and laugh ... wonderful write
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Posted by DoctorAsh on "The power of NOTHING" by diavolessa
- "glad t5o C. a small implement of positive reaction ... let us play on the freeways .... very well done, much respect "
Posted by DoctorAsh on "Incomplete" by diavolessa
- "i agree with the T.S. ... i guess i wounldn't have noticed either if he hadn't pointed it out .... but anyways ... like your other pieces ... very interesting and all around entertaining to read ... "
Posted by DoctorAsh on "Shhhhtttttt……" by diavolessa
- "nice piece ... i love the imagination that you stapled to the concept of this write .. much respect"
Posted by DoctorAsh on "She" by diavolessa
