Comments by DoctorAsh
- "well its nice to see a new work with the name cre attatched to it . this is very lovely. [D&A]"
Posted by DoctorAsh on "Eclipsed" by cre
- "Ah, very beautiful cre ... you couldn't write a death threat to someone without it casting a notion of poetry. Wonderful write. [D&A]"
Posted by DoctorAsh on "A Poet's Heart" by cre
- "cre - my angel of un-dusty: poetry + [question] + structure = emotional outlet [fences surround our houses] why? [D&A] "
Posted by DoctorAsh on "Will I Ever" by cre
- "A sigh and a smile .. Her teeth showed through her frozen lipstick, but just for a second, before she realized how powerful a memory can be , esspecia[y when she has run completely dry of them. Desperately Reliving them [D&A] wonderful piece"
Posted by DoctorAsh on "Things Change" by cre
- "Hmmmm . very well typed and., curiously interesting : Correspondence; Yeah thats it. Excellent piece [D&A]"
Posted by DoctorAsh on "Plastic Ballerina" by cre
- "ouch, this hurts cre. so much pain expressed in this write ::::sigh:::: wonderful piece. [D&A]"
Posted by DoctorAsh on "Father's Day" by cre
- "UMM>[WOW]The Seventh Power. Your word configuration in this write is astonishing. This left me feeling kinda-insignificant: [Wonderful Type]/\[D&A]"
Posted by DoctorAsh on "Slipping Time" by cre
- "she lay to remain for the duration of her life. Trapped inside the pain of something she cant escape: once inflicted and scared. True, maybe not. Thats the impression i got: Love love [D&A]"
Posted by DoctorAsh on "The Lake She Lies In" by cre
- "hmmm:interesting[an A+].The first thing i felt:Was a long cold view though a block of foggy ice:Looking through at a girl who's been locked inside :prehaps: the broken side of her heart or a relentless thought, where she lay to remain for the duration of "
Posted by DoctorAsh on "The Lake She Lies In" by cre
- "What do i sence here? hmmmmm, i cannot be a judge and say whats what. But, like the rest of us, something lurks within you thats not quite getting pushed all the way out. Whatever it is, its something i would most definetly fear. con ....."
Posted by DoctorAsh on "05-23-2003" by cre
- "EE.Thats a single letter capitalized several times as you can see.Never would i have thought about it,or dedicated any thought towards it,if you wouldn't have made it so visable cre.Like this poem,i had no idea you felt this way.Much respect and sympathy."
Posted by DoctorAsh on "I May Never Forget" by cre
- "owe .. thats hardcore, a very complicated word structure in this piece .. released .. i felt like i was watching a midevil movie while reading this ... as always cre .. your pencil speaks "
Posted by DoctorAsh on "What Death Of Soul" by cre
- "what a tough story .. i hope this is fiction , not something that .. *might* have actually happened ... at any rate .... heres a cookie . wonderful write ;) D&A"
Posted by DoctorAsh on "she won't tell" by cre
- "One of these days im going to fall out my chair and smack my head on the wall and die, and it will be all of your fault cre .. This time i only had to go change my pants after reading one of your works .. but next time, who knows what might happen."
Posted by DoctorAsh on "for we" by cre
- "Into the dryer most would put thier dilapidated clothes ... but not us, we wear them until they become *worn* "Who are you and who am I, who I was has long since died" ... such artistics, wonderful"
Posted by DoctorAsh on "Night So Dark" by cre
- "hmmmm and wow and damn and clams .. floating around with barnicles. Stuck to the inside of the skull, shaking loose feelings ... so beautiful. Wets shoes and a half moon, thats where this poemtook me .. very lovely
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Posted by DoctorAsh on "My Little Fishbowl" by cre
- "ahh ... this is more like it .. lets go stab eachother with dull forks .... nice write cre,"
Posted by DoctorAsh on "mood: alone" by cre
- "just for the hell of it .... like many other pieces of yours .... i think i'll just add another comment to make it look that much bigger and better .... kinda like ... inflation"
Posted by DoctorAsh on "Every Sky In My Mind" by cre
- "i know if i were to write a poem as long as this , no would take the time to read it ... but since your cre .. we all kinda have too ... nicely done, once again. "
Posted by DoctorAsh on "Casualties" by cre
- "wow ... i really like this one, again, this is absolutely beautiful, much respect MF"
Posted by DoctorAsh on "If I Were" by cre
- "i agree with the first two comment holders ..... this is a wonderful write .. nicely done"
Posted by DoctorAsh on "blue moon nights" by cre
