"...'she breaks her solitude into lonely portraits': that is the type of line that we poets beg for. just 1 correction: in the last line, 'hers' should be 'her'..." Posted by FadedBlues on "…Lonely…" by dumbone
"...it may be the goal of all poets to define themselves in a poem. you have done so here..." Posted by FadedBlues on "A wish for words " by dumbone
