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Comments by FadedBlues

"...i's a tender entreaty, Jo, keeps the passion burning..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "I Hope You Think of Me." by jodeanna

"...a portrait of the afterglow is rare here in theValley, Jo. but men need a rest period between bouts..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Never Wanted You More." by jodeanna

"...ghost of a lost lover. a new couch wouldn't help... "
Posted by FadedBlues on "Memories of a Couch." by jodeanna

"...opposites attract. a lioness & her not-so-successful tamer..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Untitled [She VS. He]" by jodeanna

"...this is an excellent portrait of the secret personal things that allow joy to sneak up on us... "
Posted by FadedBlues on "The Little Things, Honey." by jodeanna

"....this may be the most 'colorful' poem I've seen here. very pretty setting, ballerina in a minor battle against the mournful violins..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "& she danced against the violins." by jodeanna

"...that's surreal. people that exist only in your head: reminds me of 'A Beautiful Mind'..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "& sometimes I think you're fictional." by jodeanna

"...this is true of poets. very insightful... "
Posted by FadedBlues on "just remember." by jodeanna

"...this is starkly sensuous. & then the cold striking hand of reality at the end. your title will reveal itself in time... "
Posted by FadedBlues on "yours for an hour." by jodeanna

"...this is great. the surprise ending is beautiful,Jo..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "whispered dreams." by jodeanna

"...it's off to a great start. odd choice of protagonist: not the burly type usually associated w/a murder/madness story..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Night Terrors." by jodeanna

"...the final stanza also indicates a loss of respect & seems to predict that the abused will no longer be a victim... "
Posted by FadedBlues on "the fist that never fell." by jodeanna

"Jo, this is excellent, the mystery is enticing. in a few stanzas, you define a woman w/a very complicated persona... "
Posted by FadedBlues on "one night stand." by jodeanna

"...'constellations of freckles', 'bruised anatomical confetti', seasonings that add to the flavor of this...memories haunt like ghosts..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "ghosts of walmart." by jodeanna

"and I can imagine how you felt when you wrote it..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "how to spot defeat." by jodeanna

"Jo, this is brutal in its reality, written to cause a clenching & repulsion in the gut...you get your point across 100%..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "how to spot defeat." by jodeanna

"Jo, a profound & penetrating poem, so sad in the simple truth of it... "
Posted by FadedBlues on "not about trees." by jodeanna

"...wonderful truth in the 2nd stanza: eyes speak that which can't be conveyed in language..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "impassioned." by jodeanna

"...the title is enticing...the story is captivating, it lacks nothing & it needs nothing more..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "drunken kisses." by jodeanna

"...being lonely but not alone is a bad place to be...many gems of poetic art in this... "
Posted by FadedBlues on "alone at night." by jodeanna

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