Comments by FadedBlues
- "if I'm not home... linger at my door, dear, as you pass. upon the sullen knob of misty brass, attach a garland there, of roses ~ and sprinkle it with love. (this presupposes)"
Posted by FadedBlues on "ashes asleep " by Corinthian
- "...a little girl's nightmares, translated into language she discovered in seductive anthologies..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "ill. " by Corinthian
- "...you place your poem on a ledge, I don't have the strength to climb to it, but I come anyway, to feel the grip of what light falls on me... "
Posted by FadedBlues on "cobalt" by Corinthian
- "...Cori, your 1st stanza hit me right between the eyes. you commented that to me once, it's gratifying to see these words, your words, in a poem..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "I cross languages " by Corinthian
- "...your sad words always seem to cause weeping, although we don't quite know what brings us to these tears. if you put it here, there must be a reason to weep... "
Posted by FadedBlues on "bells of jellyfish" by Corinthian
- "...Catholic girls contain a tempest inside that restricted exterior. when they leap out of the uniform, their passion is malicious..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "snob." by Corinthian
- "...your title takes on new meaning when coupled w/your author's note. some men feel a cold patina of regret after using a whore. sin is a hoarfrost that strangles the soul... "
Posted by FadedBlues on "hoarfrost ." by Corinthian
- "...they (we each have our own visitors) come to us when we sleep & leave gifts. I think they smile if we make good use of those gifts..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Nächtiges Elend" by Corinthian
- "...the woman is made of stone. her tears are crystal & blessed...is there comfort in blue light, in dreams... "
Posted by FadedBlues on "Der Traum" by Corinthian
- "...a handful of words that generate an overflow of depth & complexity, like the miracle of the loaves & the fishes..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "blue nails." by Corinthian
- "...you translate your blue dreams into poems of blue, & the musical notes dissolve as blue bubbles... "
Posted by FadedBlues on "shimmer." by Corinthian
- "...I see a mistress disillusioned with her current state, wasting indigo 'violent passion'..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "gloss." by Corinthian
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