Comments by Ortolan
- "You're describing everything I battle in my work as well, as I'm sure many others do.Maybe (hopefully) a golden age will return, but til then, it's all about the machine."
Posted by Ortolan on "Unambiguous" by Nehema
- "Excellent rhythm and rhyming.I enjoy poems that are colorful and easy to read.The emotion, or impression I should say, comes through very clearly.Thank you for writing."
Posted by Ortolan on "Afflicted " by Nehema
- " Well done, plainly structured and to the point.A bonus that there is a point, truth=10."
Posted by Ortolan on "Storyteller" by Nehema
