Comments by Ortolan

  • "I enjoyed the intricacies of the lettering here.Tethers remind me of a spider-Woman.I can't see such a thin line separating fact from fiction though.We might need extra eyes for that. - Å’ "
    Posted by Ortolan on "Tethered" by Phalanx
  • "This poem feels noble.Someone should push back, in fact everyone should, in waves and droves at times.Thanks 'Lanx. - Å’ "
    Posted by Ortolan on "Kinetic" by Phalanx
  • " I really like the concept.The portrayal of decay into delirium is a fitting conclusion for a personal battle with taboo and desire. "
    Posted by Ortolan on "Tree Sex" by Phalanx
  • " If you listen close enough you can hear the voice of primordial wisdom.It's echoing through time.Now what happens if one decides to eat the dreams of the adversary? Rotten food for thought maybe. Cool write, like your style."
    Posted by Ortolan on "Selective Hearing" by Phalanx
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