Comments by haunted
- "oh yeah, im loving this, it is kind of on the morbid side and that's always a plus in my book. this flowed very well the rhyming is perfect and the story line is awesome. I to imagined a park and not a cemetery. and even then you never reveal a graveyard which leaves it open for interpretation. I think your on to something Caitlin, keep writing in this style because I loved the twist and I loved the suspense and I also loved that until the end the impact was not what could be predicted. that's great writing. awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "Imagining the Sky" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "haha I used to hang around a person like this, constantly feeding my dark side. theres many shades of black in the dark, anywhere from depression to just down right evil, and everything in between. my favorite shade of black is the kind when people go out of there way to judge you as evil and dark and scary and creepy. I always just say, thank you! because that's the intention, that's what I feel inside and black is just the reflection I cast. and I cant be damned by being happy. excellent poem, short and sweet and very blunt and effective, a clear picture and its awesome Caitlin."
Posted by haunted on "Black" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "wow, or yay! its been awhile since you posted and you did a great job with this one. I think everybody wants a piece of some part of our lives, to be in it, to confuse, to irritate, to make us unhappy and some just take whats left and spit us out. its a frustrated poem it sounds like, and I can feel that. excellent poem Caitlin and keep writing your very good at it, hope to see more of you. awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "Falling" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "the thorns keep us alive, they remind us pain is real and in this case they take the pain from tormenting demons from infesting our dreams or nightmares. real or not, theres no easy way out. but i loved your poem, and if you rearranged some words here and there, this poem would really kick ass and flow nicely. awesome caitlinryen!"
Posted by haunted on "Thorns On The Ground" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "awe thats ashame you feel that way about yourself. you should never hide who you are. if you want someone to keep, it has to start with trust and honesty. i met mine in high school and its 26 years later and built on those two things. i dont think anybodys really that ugly inside i think that just means that the two arent compatible in each others eyes. good luck to you and quit beating yourself up...your beautiful."
Posted by haunted on "Distorted Observance" by Intoxicating Delirium
