Comments by haunted

  • "excellent poem jess, this poem flows so well its damn near epic. the content could only be spoken from a person that's been there and your birds eye view of the carnage self harmers go through and where they've been is amazing. its really good and I think maybe this is one of your best due to the beat and flow, its really flawless. nice one jess!"
    Posted by haunted on "How did it get this far?" by Deathkitten
  • "really cool jess, a ray of hope in this one as a struggle still ensues. pain will always be there. you just have to smile sometimes and say, im not having it today. i liked this poem, it does have a sadness but i sense hope and victory over another day lived. awesome poem!"
    Posted by haunted on "*~Deep Down~*" by Deathkitten
  • "oh jess, paradise can never be found where the pain lies deep in the water we bathe in. stained in scars and soaked in the blood from our cuts. in my opinion the bath tub is a terrible place to get release. i cringe at that. but you painted a clear picture of this and I see it and its a life being borderline, its a hell of a climb while your going downhill. I hate that we've suffered....why? why cant we be medicated so were so fucking numb, that we can actually start piecing it together. why cant we just look in the mirror and say I love you. so simple, so fucking far away. I love when you speak up, you have a strong opinion and knowledge of the torment, which is why I love reading you. on this one it got me kind of upset because it brings back memories of those days as I sat alone wishing I was dead and would cut because id rather suffer than die. its a hard road and you got all my ways of contact. I will be there if you ever need a friend. thanks jess."
    Posted by haunted on "Just like a "cutter"" by Deathkitten
  • "man jess, if I could take it all away I would burn down every fucking memory that exists in your pain. a great poem loaded with some very traumatic examples of what the mind does not discard. these things are really tragic and you nailed it square on the head. the details in the senses, you cant make that shit up. I would smell things and take lifelong notice and be reminded of such horror every time I thought of it, the smell and taste of it. really sad that this happens and you captured it so well, your a great poet with a detailed mind. what more could you ask for. awesome jess!"
    Posted by haunted on "Run Away: Welcome to [North Carolina]" by Deathkitten
  • "hmm, sounds like a case of the blind leading the blind maybe. I think giving the vulnerable or weak a place to go is noble. the discarded can flourish but not all can be saved. I think I got that understood, but I still cant see anything! hmm, lol...if this makes no sense to you, im with you. lol...its all in the eye of the beholder. so behold! nice poem jess!"
    Posted by haunted on "xXBuild the MasterXx" by Deathkitten
  • "this is really a great poem, I plan on getting to know you more and being good friends. let the deepest oceans waves crash into me, drowning me with the sunset in your eyes. very nice jess! awesome!"
    Posted by haunted on "~Element: Oceanic~" by Deathkitten
  • "nice poem jess, sounds like some suffering to me is at stake. maybe laughing at its torment. I don't know just the way I read it. excellent poem."
    Posted by haunted on "+Teach me helpless+" by Deathkitten
  • "man jess, I know this. I know this animal that rips us apart mentally and emotionally. I had borderline and its a mother fucker to tame. its full of pain and you snap for no reason only to hate yourself for it so you can hurt yourself, like a fucking punishment for being. its horrible and im familiar with it, I lived it , I survived it. it was hard and I had to face many things I refused to deal with. but when you face them, the pain goes away with much less of an impact. its manageable. my best to you jess, I know it hurts and you will survive, I promise you. your poem is very good I like it, I can see you think and this one is heartbreaking to read. believe it or not im at a loss for words. because I know its hard. hang tough kitten. just know your loved by me."
    Posted by haunted on "KILL IT!" by Deathkitten
  • "I love this jess, the perfect summer poem and in this your flow is perfection. this is one of those poems that made me feel good. the beach and people watching getting fried in the sun and you even brought drinks! amazing detail. I miss the beach, so thanks for reminding about the good times I had at the them. awesome!"
    Posted by haunted on "Those were the days?" by Deathkitten
  • "nice poem, you sound a little flustered. when you write you have the ability to move people, you do me, and I love that. I love that I can feel your mood. that's why I love poetry so much. I love people and everybodys different and through words were individuals. your sassy and brilliant jess! and I love it. awesome!"
    Posted by haunted on "Dissociative? Maybe" by Deathkitten
  • "this is beautiful, I love your poems they always flow with ease when their read. and your perspective is always interesting in a good way. im a huge fan as you know because your awesome. you know that right? you are! nice."
    Posted by haunted on "~Before The Break~" by Deathkitten
  • "jess your so good at expressing yourself, I cant believe you being shunned, your to artistic and creative to ever be ignored. your poem is just as lovely as you. awesome!"
    Posted by haunted on "The StronGer Side of Me" by Deathkitten
  • "you go girl with your bad self..lol...awesome poem jess, you are a pro at knocking people back to reality. and I respect that a lot. because your gospel is truth most of the time as I can always relate in one way or another. awesome!"
    Posted by haunted on "[Investing in Me]" by Deathkitten
  • "haha yeah jess, this puts them in place with spit on their face. you have a way with words and I love it, I love your take no shit attitude that I envy. awesome poem!"
    Posted by haunted on "Yeah, look at you" by Deathkitten
  • "very nice poem jess! this is you at your best. the bad ass that we all love. but yeah I like this poem very much because I love your perspective and when you write its very raw and sounds like you know your boundries in certain situations like this for example. your showing your firm thick skin and its always a turn on. awesome!"
    Posted by haunted on "Tell me i'm lying..." by Deathkitten
  • "oh jess, im in so much need of a woman like this, this sounds to me like the perfect one night stand. a woman of the night to come make my fantasies a reality. this is a beautiful poem and in my eyes a tribute to the gorgeous ladies that wait in the shadows. with my luck though they would be lesbians, damn! I loved it, awesome!"
    Posted by haunted on ".*Wicked Women*." by Deathkitten
  • "yeah im pretty convinced this sounds exactly what I felt like when I got my thick ass nose pierced! that shit hurt! next time i'll get the deluxe piercing that comes with a hand job for the pain. I think pleasure is an excellent way to remedy it as its being delivered. awesome poem jess!"
    Posted by haunted on "[Pain_is_God]" by Deathkitten
  • "holy fuck this is crazy ass good! you got a very strong message here. I knew when you were pissed you'd part the sea. bravo my sweety on such a spit in the face poem that's really poisonous. awesome!"
    Posted by haunted on "That broken record" by Deathkitten
  • "as a smoker I understand being breathless, I know its off the topic but theres many things that make me breathless. like your poem has done. your an awesome writer jess, and you never disappoint. awesome!"
    Posted by haunted on "~Breath-less~" by Deathkitten
  • "this is very well written and I imagine a little awkward to write about a man that more or less abandoned you from his life. but he went through the trouble to see you but only in a court room just to prove hes not the father. I think your better off without him. and I wouldn't apologize for not thinking of him jess! its sad to think of your father not wanting to be a father and its gotta be hurtful when he doesn't want the responsibility of being a father to you. i'll take a moment of silence because im hurting for you. awesome jess!"
    Posted by haunted on "Your Father's Day Gift" by Deathkitten
  • "that sounds really delicious, I don't give a shit what happens in this clincher. I would walk on broken glass all the way to south Carolina just so you could nurse my wounds. that's my clincher. very nice jess!"
    Posted by haunted on "-The Clincher-" by Deathkitten
  • "this is such a refreshing place you took me, this is like a happy place for me. the turbulence in the weather and then the delicate kisses of rain that fall down on us. I love the rain. and you simply took the many soothing and refreshing moments ive shared with mother nature in the rain. a happy place for sure. awesome jess!"
    Posted by haunted on "Rain-kissed Lips" by Deathkitten
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