Comments by haunted

  • "very cool and very melodic. i would have asked if these were lyricas if you hadnt of said so. theres a nice melody to it when its read. thanks!"
    Posted by haunted on "Sunder" by WatchTheWorldCollapse
  • "first i have to say that your ryhming is the shit! this poem flows incredibly well. very nice writing. and second, you really have pain about life. i know because ive been down that road many times and survived a couple of attempts. all i can say is it gets better, i promise! life just works itself out and its like riding a roller coaster with no brakes. when does it end. you just fucking hang on until it finally comes to a stop. i dont know your situation but for me i still live with feelings of deep emptieness and depression. you writing poems about how you feel is extremely theraputic. reach out to people, dont be alone to much if you can. if it gets to intense, call a crisis line. it can feel like nobody may love you at times. but think of those same people mourning your death. they would be a fucking mess, because they love you! "
    Posted by haunted on "suicide and why" by WatchTheWorldCollapse
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