Comments by haunted

  • "damn this was a lovely stroll through the suffering in a suicidal phase. ive been to this place and it was a bit hard to stomach for me. its just so fucking realistic, you did an excellent job writting this ciera! "
    Posted by haunted on "September Suicides #1 (Call Center Violence)" by RubyXero
  • "very nice ruby and very heartfelt. i can feel your passion in this. your words speak very highly of your sister and i do sense this longing you have to have it back to the way it was. maybe someday you will. i would say take what you can get and remember that blood is thicker than water. i wish the best for you. very good write ruby...i loved it!"
    Posted by haunted on "The Solitary Climb" by RubyXero
  • "ruby you sound completely torn to peices. in this poem you have let him tear you down and sounds like you are a slave for anything he offers you when it may not even be given or offered. you almost sound like the victim. its a great poem and i love to hear it when people honestly write about themselves. thank you for sharing and you need to get your heart back and learn from this. then you'll be saying....i blame myself. awesome ruby! stay strong."
    Posted by haunted on "I Blame You!!!!" by RubyXero
  • "hey ruby! how goes it...i loved your metaphore in this. its very clever and your imagination really paid off in this one. this poem is awesome! for some ruby alot of women are cellos and when they tune you up...just tune them out! otherwise they will always play you...fantastic poem! loved it....good seeing you again!"
    Posted by haunted on "Screaming Melody" by RubyXero
  • "oh to be in the zone, but i think what kind of powders under that credit card is what makes or breaks it! i suppose a night of recovery or days from recovery makes the difference in powders. but i loved it, but i dont think you'll ever feel rested on that shit when theres kids that need tending. awesome!"
    Posted by haunted on "Zombie Queen" by RubyXero
  • "very interesting topic, and sometimes dream interpritation can be black and white. i used to have a book of definitions on symbolizism of dreams and it was helpful because some dreams make no sense! but others have a very clear secret to be had. its very intersting though. i recommend a book of dream meanings. its fascinating to know. its almost like a psyhcic reading or getting a tarot done! awesome poem ruby."
    Posted by haunted on "Windermere Dreams" by RubyXero
  • "when i read this ruby it sounded like you had stage fright badly, with nerves unlike steel. but with your authors note it became clear that the butterflies were just you being non- modest and reserved about your relationship with jose maybe. and your right, why boast about being great friends in such an emotional state. it might make things worse for you emotionally. im sorry about your friend. nobody will replace him, but i know you will find somebody that will give you what your missing. i wish i could dance! but thats how i read this. its fantastic, awesome write ruby!"
    Posted by haunted on " Places, Everybody!!!" by RubyXero
  • "so beautiful, i love the presence of death in this. the choice of sunflowers over jasmine because they wont blind is clever. if what your saying is that jasmine has the lure of deeply falling, im hooked. this painted a lovely picture in my mind. im morbid and i hope i read this right. but death can come softly. excellent ruby!"
    Posted by haunted on "(Safely) Behind Silenced Lips" by RubyXero
  • "wow, truly amazing. your words are very colorful and you covered this canvas with all your beauty and colors! awesome!"
    Posted by haunted on "Tear Stained Smiles" by RubyXero
  • "very nice, just a great poem,. and i loved the drowning cascading down into your next stanza. very cool!"
    Posted by haunted on "Blinding Essence" by RubyXero
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