Comments by dwells
- "Self-sacrifice on a hope seems to be a setup for inevitable disappointment maybe, best of luck and all-consuming."
Posted by dwells on "Matchstick" by Dei
- "Keeping it overly-simple perhaps, because sometimes simpler is better, but not all the time. Eventually the knuckle-dragging cave man will surface and single words will turn into physical blows, or maybe only rejection without expression or confession. Not a good partner for a poet I'd guess? Well done Natelle!"
Posted by dwells on "Exhaled Exultations" by Dei
- "Tremendous metaphor with the telescope and the empty drink glass! Love to dig my toes in the sandy bottom when I go clamming. Enjoyed this piece on several levels, thanks Natelle!"
Posted by dwells on "Sea Salt" by Dei
- "Giving-in and giving up are two concepts: one a temporary state, and the other permanent. Sounds here like you have made that progression, keep fighting lady!"
Posted by dwells on "He spoke venom." by Dei
- "Rainbows in the dark sounds quite steamy - water vapor rising with its warmth, in the cool night air, and only the moonbeams to split the color spectrum, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "rainbows in the dark. " by Dei
- "And who could argue, and who could deny that which comes unanounced, to grasp it completely - and jealousy guard it. Cheers AD!"
Posted by dwells on "My name is Perfection." by Dei
- "Sounds like that one's irretrievably broken probably. Most profoundly postulated and the longing is palpable - and who's to decorate a perceived perversion with descriptive adjectives anyway? Cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Scent." by Dei
- "Sounds like a bad way to go, but at least you got the diamond! Cheers AD."
Posted by dwells on "Char. -Haiku" by Dei
- "I could feel this spiralling down, from the universe, to nature, to the personal. Congratulations on a fine and noble effort, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Phi." by Dei
- "Hardly an affront and hoping he feels the same way too, cheers and some wonderful imaginings!"
Posted by dwells on "An Effort At Prose" by Dei
- "Abandonment can be the hardest cross of all to bear. Always wondering and never knowing for sure. Suspect he got a better deal? - and now there is no going back. Selfish and self-centered; be glad he's gone."
Posted by dwells on "Sunflower Rd" by Dei
