Comments by dwells
- "A whimsical grotesquerie of a geographic fantasy that comes with no travel brochure, I'm sure. The bugs gave this that extra creepy flavor for certain DL. Also, the cryptic feeling imbued by your opening, left the helpless reader with a sense of falling Cheers and hoping the round trip ticket was a bargain! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "zooming down a shocking blu highway" by Devil lyn
- "An excruciating yet tantalizing insight of something sacred, yet squandered on another less appreciative perhaps. To be held in painful abeyance as a second fiddle, is a bummer. Cheers DL and keep them smoking! - Dan "
Posted by dwells on "concubine`a" by Devil lyn
- "The final verse is in the hearse; while life goes on and we re.hearse :) Cheers DL and just let it happen for the muse is a fickle passenger, and only a hitch hiker ultimately - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "death`note" by Devil lyn
- "There will never be a shortage, sadly DL, for the next generation is cultivating a bumper crop. Hurts so good, and cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "assholes" by Devil lyn
- "When the magic fades, and contempt wags the finger of blame for a life of less perhaps. Sadly told and sorrowful for all concerned; the progression was hypnotic Cheers Dev! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "black-listed verses" by Devil lyn
- "Some mixed emotions come across with these memories Dev and it seems like everything is a trade-off perhaps. You had me from the opening - cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Trailer Park Girl" by Devil lyn
- "That thirty thousand foot view. We think we see all, but the minuscule mischief is best viewed from the grave perhaps Dev. Liked the stream of consciousness feel to this and where it went. Feed the birds and cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "in`sectional hymn & some thing about Love " by Devil lyn
- "The opening stanza was as good as any I've ever read in this genre of the macabre Dev. Makes me feel like I can't help but look where I shouldn't. Cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "2Crows" by Devil lyn
- "Always a hard act to follow Dev. You frame some unique thoughts that are all part of a common portrait shared by many. The closing was killer - cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "i, unValentine" by Devil lyn
- "The closing put a big bow around this Easter basket Dev, and guessing Mrs. Peter Cottontail fell from favor as the Spring turned to Summer. Cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "she wasn`t a Playboy Bunny" by Devil lyn
- "The maggot bliss line was such a superb image that I can't shake it yet DL. The second half style was reminiscent of someone who I used to know from the old neighborhood. This was a relentless onslaught of 12 gauge perfection. Cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "macabre en concerto" by Devil lyn
- "I liked the way you brought this full-circle DL. First the sowing, then an interlude with the forces of darkness, and finally the breeding... (but "from this earth" has a duality that is delicious). Lots to like here and welcome to DP - cheers! - Dan "
Posted by dwells on "i, Devil~lyn" by Devil lyn
