Comments by dwells

  • "NN, long time my friend; you haven't missed a beat either! I was wondering how you'd wrap this one and the closing was a metaphorical marvel. Always love a good socio-political commentary when you take it from the micro to the macro. Kudos for the nod to HPLovecraft and Cthulu. Cheers! - Dan"
    Posted by dwells on "Animus ~ chthonic" by NarcissusNarcosis
  • "limb.o (maybe?) - marvelous visions painted darkly and deeply, and that lake burns (don't forget your water wings, or do they call them swimmies, or floaties now?) Cheers and one of your best!"
    Posted by dwells on "WritingMyOwnEnding" by NarcissusNarcosis
  • "Keep rolling that rock up the hill every day and maybe some night it won't roll back down! Your songspeak is superfluously superb and much enjoyed. The flow was great! (HA)"
    Posted by dwells on "Sex With A Dictionary!" by NarcissusNarcosis
  • "Do the meds help, or maybe only make it worse I wonder? Side effects possibly similar to operant conditioning when rats are forced into an over-crowded environment. Adreno-corticoid steroids spike in reaction to the stress, and much the same as you describe in this piece. We all need our space, sometimes more - sometimes less. OK now leave $50 with the receptionist and I'll see you next week, cheers NN!"
    Posted by dwells on "Vicious Cycle" by NarcissusNarcosis
  • "Wait until the electric bill comes, then you will get a glimpse of the next level of Hell, and it will only get worse with the new EPA regs, but it's part of the master plan to break the system, and then re-create into the ideal. Sorry NN for the verbosity, this could be one of your best - like grape juice into wine, cheers!"
    Posted by dwells on "Air-Conditioned Hell" by NarcissusNarcosis
  • "Every incubus needs a succubus, now I gotta look up "dudgeon", thanks NN! Great surprise ending I didn't see coming and very insightful in retrospect, cheers!"
    Posted by dwells on "Incubus Mentality" by NarcissusNarcosis
  • "One of your best and those regrets should be put to rest. Now get out and circulate before you become an agoraphobic - just don't engage any liberals in any intelligent discussions because they are pre-programmed, cheers and much enjoyed the isolation."
    Posted by dwells on "Stained-Glass House" by NarcissusNarcosis
  • "This is the trajectory of life beyond the karmatic paybacks, When the good die young and the old seek the eternal fountain of youth. Much truth and pluck my eyes with a pin from Mother's robe, cheers NN!"
    Posted by dwells on "From Atop the Ledge..." by NarcissusNarcosis
  • "Nark has returned, YES! Welcome back buddy and this was a magnificent re-entry. Gotta admit I misread one line as "Are my dead spanking me?" - then I slowed down a bit and got back in the subterranean groove. Cheers to you!"
    Posted by dwells on "Color Me..." by NarcissusNarcosis
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